Homework ;)
학생이 쓴 원문
You know that I'm not working yet.
So I don't know much about the bad working conditions in Korea.
However I know about the bad condition in doing part time jobs; we recieve low payment in our part time jobs.(5210 won per hour at minimum)
I heard that Japan pays twice more money than us.
If it's okay, I want to write about the thing that I wish to be improved in Korea,
It's time table making war. Actually, tomorrow I have to register for classes.
I call it war because it really seems like a war. If you can't register for the class, you have to take other classes or you have to wait until next semester if you really want that class. Fast clicking skill is very important.(Seriously)
There is a funny video describing this war:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uoIGv9qimcU
And for this reason I think I have to skip tomorrow's class. I'm really sorry.
Wish me good luck and see you on Wedsday.
Have a wonderful day. Bye;)
강사 첨삭
Thank you very much for wishing me a good day my dear [이름]
I hope you\'ll have a great day as well.
By the way, I am very pleased reading your homework.
It\'s nice that you\'re trying to write about something else instead when the question given to you
doesn\'t suit your case. I love that so much! I don\'t mind reading something different! :)
I\'d be looking forward to talking with you again tomorrow!
Good luck to your enrolment! :) See you~~
T.Kristel-
You know that I\'m not working yet.
>> CORRECT!!
>> As you know, I am not working yet.So I don\'t know much about the bad working conditions in Korea.
>> CORRECT!!However I know about the bad condition in doing part time jobs; we recieve low payment in our part time jobs.(5210 won per hour at minimum)
>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!I heard that Japan pays twice more money than us.
>> I heard that Japan pays twice as much as ours.If it\'s okay, I want to write about the thing that I wish to be improved in Korea,
>> CORRECT!!It\'s time table making war. Actually, tomorrow I have to register for classes.
>> CORRECT!! Actually, tomorrow, I have to enrol.I call it war because it really seems like a war.
>> CORRECT!!
If you can\'t register for the class, you have to take other classes or you have to wait until next semester if you really want that class.
>> CORRECT!!
Fast clicking skill is very important.(Seriously)
>> CORRECT!!There is a funny video describing this war:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uoIGv9qimcU
>> CORRECT!!And for this reason I think I have to skip tomorrow\'s class. I\'m really sorry.
>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!Wish me good luck and see you on Wedsday.
>> CORRECT!! (Wednesday)Have a wonderful day. Bye;)
>> CORRECT!!
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