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2014-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi teacher I always thank you for your advice. and I effort to improve my english skill your responce is usuful methods in my study of English Thanks Nothing is more important to a country's future than education. I fully agree above teh sentense For example, Our country don't have any matural resources except people to make more rich than other counties. so, many parients have been educationg their child to live in affuence.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

Thank you for your composition today! It\'s my pleasure to guide you at all times. I\'m glad that you find my tips useful.

Keep up the good work and I\'m sure that your skills will improve further.

Have a nice day!

T. Mona

Hi, teacher.
>> Correct

I always thank you for your advice.
>> Correct

and I effort to improve my english skill
>> I will always exert an effort to improve my English skills.

your responce is usuful methods in my study of English
>> Your feedback is useful when I study English.

Thanks.
>> Correct
Nothing is more important to a country\'s future than education.
>> Correct
I fully agree above teh sentense
>> I fully agree with the sentence above.

For example, Our country don\'t have any matural resources except people to make more rich than other counties.
>> For example, our country doesn\'t have many natural resources. We only have people who can make our country richer than others.

so, many parients have been educationg their child to live in affuence.

>> So, many parents educate their child to live in affluence.

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