Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Great morning Ms. [Name]!
How are you doing?
I like reading your compositions every time.
You are sharing every bit of information about you and your family.
I have known your plans and goals in life because you share it to me.
So thank you very much.
And I do hope that I am reciprocating it by helping you improve your English skills.
From the first time that we talked until now, I can see that you are gradually improving.
No kidding on that.
And you are getting there already.
And your husband is correct in what he had recommended to you.
So I hope you will follow it too.
Thanks a bunch and see you later!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Theseday, my husband recommend to me about how to study English.
>> These days, my husband recommended to me how to study English.
He told me that I have to memorise a lot of vocabularies and I need to study basic grammer.
>> He told me that I have to memorize a lot of vocabularies and I need to study the basic grammar.
His point is right.
>> correct!
>> or: Her has a right point.
I\'d like to start it from spring vacation.
>> I\'d like to start it this coming spring vacation.
I also check your comment carefully.
>> I will also check your comment carefully.
What trip would you most likely take in your lifetime?
Well, my best trip was honeymoon.
>> Well, my best trip was my honeymoon.
We went to Japan for four days.
>> correct!
It was great.
>> correct!
I think this is because we are considerate of each other.
>> I think this is because we are considerate to each other.
And then we went to other places but it was just good.
>> correct!
I have a plan to go America for study for six months.
>> I have a plan to go to America to study for 6 months.
And I\'d like to go Turkey and Europe with my husband like honeymoon.
>> And I\'d like to go to Turkey and Europe with my husband just like a honeymoon.
We can celebrate our wedding while traveling.
>> We can celebrate our wedding anniversary while traveling.
I will go to Taiwan with my graduate school friends.
>> correct!
It will be graduation travel.
>> It will be a graduation travel.
However all these plans can be put off if I have a baby. Hahaha.
>> However, all these plan can be put off if I will have a baby. hahaha.
Finally, I will go to trip with family members in near my house.
>> Finally, I will go a trip with my family members near my house.
I know all trip will be good.
>> I know that all trips will be good.
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