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2014-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Theseday, my husband recommend to me about how to study English. He told me that I have to memorise a lot of vocabularies and I need to study basic grammer. His point is right. I'd like to start it from spring vacation. I also check your comment carefully. What trip would you most likely take in your lifetime? Well, my best trip was honeymoon. We went to Japan for four days. It was great. I think this is because we are considerate of each other. And then we went to other places but it was just good. I have a plan to go America for study for six months. And I'd like to go Turkey and Europe with my husband like honeymoon. We can celebrate our wedding while traveling. I will go to Taiwan with my graduate school friends. It will be graduation travel. However all these plans can be put off if I have a baby. Hahaha. Finally, I will go to trip with family members in near my house. I know all trip will be good.

강사 첨삭

Great morning Ms. [Name]!

How are you doing?

I like reading your compositions every time.
You are sharing every bit of information about you and your family.

I have known your plans and goals in life because you share it to me.
So thank you very much.
And I do hope that I am reciprocating it by helping you improve your English skills.

From the first time that we talked until now, I can see that you are gradually improving.
No kidding on that.

And you are getting there already.

And your husband is correct in what he had recommended to you.
So I hope you will follow it too.

Thanks a bunch and see you later!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


Theseday, my husband recommend to me about how to study English.

>>  These days, my husband recommended to me how to study English.

He told me that I have to memorise a lot of vocabularies and I need to study basic grammer.

>> He told me that I have to memorize a lot of vocabularies and I need to study the basic grammar.

His point is right.

>> correct!

>> or: Her has a right point.

I\'d like to start it from spring vacation.

>> I\'d like to start it this coming spring vacation.

I also check your comment carefully.
>> I will also check your comment carefully.
What trip would you most likely take in your lifetime?
 Well, my best trip was honeymoon.

>>  Well, my best trip was my honeymoon.

We went to Japan for four days.

>> correct!

It was great.

>>  correct!

I think this is because we are considerate of each other.

>> I think this is because we are considerate to each other.

And then we went to other places but it was just good.

>>  correct!

I have a plan to go America for study for six months.

>> I have a plan to go to America to study for 6 months.

And I\'d like to go Turkey and Europe with my husband like honeymoon.

>> And I\'d like to go to Turkey and Europe with my husband just like a honeymoon.

We can celebrate our wedding while traveling.

>>  We can celebrate our wedding anniversary while traveling.

I will go to Taiwan with my graduate school friends.

>> correct!

It will be graduation travel.

>> It will be a graduation travel.

However all these plans can be put off if I have a baby. Hahaha.

>> However, all these plan can be put off if I will have a baby. hahaha.

Finally, I will go to trip with family members in near my house.

>> Finally, I will go a trip with my family members near my house.

I know all trip will be good.

>> I know that all trips will be good.

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