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Hi teacher
today is thursday
>> Hi teacher. Today is Thursday.
time is so fast, I can\'t afford to recover my sense.
>> Time is so fast that I can\'t afford to recover my senses.
below is my homework
>> Below is my homework.
The best way to solve the world\'s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel.
-->To increase for solveing the world\'s environmental prlblems is not best way
>> To increase the cost of fuel for solving the world\'s environmental problems is not the best way.
It\'s purpose is to reduce the total demand amount, but it\'s only tempory eoffort.
>> Its purpose is to reduce the total demand in the amount but it\'s only for temporary.
The root solution is to develop alternative energy like wind power and solar power.
>> The best solution is to develop an alternative energy like wind power and solar power.
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