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2014-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hi teacher today is thursday time is so fast, I can't afford to recover my sense. below is my homework The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. -->To increase for solveing the world's environmental prlblems is not best way It's purpose is to reduce the total demand amount, but it's only tempory eoffort. The root solution is to develop alternative energy like wind power and solar power.

강사 첨삭

Hi there,

Thank you so much for your precious time.

I really appreciate everything that you have shared today.

Thank you also for doing your homework.

I really appreciate it very much.

Well enjoy the rest of your time.

Have a great evening!

~Teacher Mona

Hi teacher
today is thursday

>> Hi teacher. Today is Thursday.
 time is so fast, I can\'t afford to recover my sense.
>> Time is so fast that I can\'t afford to recover my senses.
 below is my homework
>> Below is my homework.
The best way to solve the world\'s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel.

-->To increase for solveing the world\'s environmental prlblems is not best way

>> To increase the cost of fuel for solving the world\'s environmental problems is not the best way.
It\'s purpose is to reduce the total demand amount, but it\'s only tempory eoffort.

>> Its purpose is to reduce the total demand in the amount but it\'s only for temporary.
The root solution is to develop alternative energy like wind power and solar power.

>> The best solution is to develop an alternative energy like wind power and solar power.

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