Homework^^

I can't come up with the answer to the question how precious my life is. Actually I don't know if I'm living well. Now, nothing seems to ensure my future. And these days things I've wanted didn't get well so sometimes I worried about and doubt my life. But that doesn't mean I will give up my life because as they say my good days will come after bads days. Yeh!!^^(I wish those days would come early and last long.) And I remember when TV showed the first legally accepted euthanasia moment. I was surprised but I thought it would be better to implement euthanasia when living feels like a hell. And my opinion about euthanasia doesn't change. People have their rights when to end their lives. Who would choose to live if you have no choice but to live in horrible pain? However it's really sad they rather choose to die than to live. And that's why I said health is worth giving up everything I have in today's class. We should eat healthy foods a lot rather than cheesecakes.kkkk Bye,Kristel;)

Hello there [이름]!! The last line of this composition is really funny..haha! I hope I could control eating sweets such as cheesecakes. However, my boyfriend loves it too so I couldn\'t help but to eat when he asks me too..haha! It\'s a torture.. haha! Anyway, good job to this one once again. Please check on some minor corrections I made here though. Have a great day and see you later in the class~~ T.Kristel- I can\'t come up with the answer to the question how precious my life is. >>  I can\'t come up with an  answer to the question how precious my life is. Actually I don\'t know if I\'m living well. >> CORRECT!! >> Actually, I don\'t even know if I\'m really living my life.Now, nothing seems to ensure my future. And these days things I\'ve wanted didn\'t get well so sometimes I worried about and doubt my life. >> CORRECT!!  And these days, the things I\'ve wanted didn\'t go according to the plan so sometimes I worry and doubt my life. >>CORRECT!!  And these days, the things I\'ve wanted went out of hand so sometimes I worry and doubt my life.But that doesn\'t mean I will give up my life because as they say my good days will come after bads days. Yeh!!^^ (I wish those days would come early and last long.) >> CORRECT!! (I wish those days would come very soon and last long.)And I remember when TV showed the first legally accepted euthanasia moment. >> And I remember when a program on the TV showed the first legally accepted case of Euthanasia.I was surprised but I thought it would be better to implement euthanasia when living feels like a hell. And my opinion about euthanasia doesn\'t change. >> CORRECT!! CORRECT!! (My stand on Euthanasia is still the same.)People have their rights when to end their lives. >> CORRECT!! Who would choose to live if you have no choice but to live in horrible pain? >> CORRECT!! However it\'s really sad they rather choose to die than to live. >> CORRECT!! And that\'s why I said health is worth giving up everything I have in today\'s class. >> CORRECT!! We should eat healthy foods a lot rather than cheesecakes.kkkk >> CORRECT!! Bye,Kristel;) >> CORRECT!!