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ESSAY: Do you think athletes earn enough money, not enough money or too much money?
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Before I start writing the essay, I would like to define two types of athletes.

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 The one has already become famous. And another one is not.
>> The one who is already famous and the one who is not.
The first one able to earn plenty of money whenever he wants.

>>The first one is earning plenty of money and can buy whatever he wants.

A lot of sport clubs, TV shows, and directors of advertisement call him since they also want to borrow his fame to guarantee their products and improve their team to be win.

>>A lot of sport clubs, TV shows, and advertising directors call famous athletes to guarantee the success in promoting their products and it could also assure the success of their team to win the game.

His name becomes a kind of merchandise to guarantee without any efforts.
>>They use his name as merchandise without doing any effort.
But, on the other hand, although another one tries to do effort to earn money such as advertise himself, trying to find a job and something like that.

>>On the other hand, another athlete tries to do his best to earn money such as advertising himself, trying to find a job and something like that.

His ransom is not expensive that he expected.
>>His pay is not that much.

>>His talent fee is not that much.
 And most athletes are in the same condition as the second one. So, they earn not enough money I guess.
>>Most athletes have the same condition as the second one so, they don\'t earn enough money I guess.
In conclusion, I think just few athletes earn too much money and others aren’t.

>>In conclusion, I think just a few athletes earn too much money and others don’t.