homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Tomorrow is the important day.
Because I'll have a Chineese contest tomorrow.
I'm so nervous.
I don't make a good score yet.
I want to make a good score.
Lieber Gott!please give me a courage.(?)
강사 첨삭
Good evening Tom!
It\'s a nice Friday to you! Thank you for sending me a composition today.
Good luck! I know that you can do it!
Don\'t be nervous. You should be confident that you will be able to get a high score.
Believe in yourself! I am so happy with your performance this week.
Teacher Nina
Tomorrow is the important day.
>> Tomorrow is an important day. Because I\'ll have a Chineese contest tomorrow.
>> OR: It is because I will have a Chinese contest.
>> It is because I\'m going to have a Chinese contest.I\'m so nervous.
>> Correct
>> OR: I\'m anxious. I don\'t make a good score yet.
>> I didn\'t make a good score yet.
>> OR: I didn\'t get a high score yet.I want to make a good score.
>> Correct
>> OR: I want to get a high score. Lieber Gott!
>> Correct ( It means Oh my God!. This is a German expression)
please give me a courage.(?)
>> Please give me courage.
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