Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I was very busy but it was good thing. it was warm and sunny and I felt so good. I went to the library for sutudy and then I went to school for work. I cleaned my house from 2 to 4 p.m. I wiped window and refrigerator and so on. I sarted book sharing meeting today.
What's your favorite comfort food? These day, I am enjoying witch soup which made by vegetables. I will tell you about recipe. At first, you boil tomato, carrot, broccoli and cabbage and then you use blender after put it all with apple and banana. It is all. It you drink it before meal, it will good for your skin, stomach and health. I have a plan diet through it. I have to eat only this. Can I do this? Hahaha. It is comfort food. First of all, it is delicious and healthy. Would you try it?:)
It's a midnight. I have to get up at 5 a.m. because I have to go to Seoul. I go to bed. Bye-bye. Have a nice a weekend.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!
It\'s already midnight there I guess.
But before I go to sleep, I have to finish this first. kkkk
Well, I think I can
t try what you have been trying already. hahaha.
I know it\'s healthy but I\'m not used to drinking such kind of food or meal.
And I also don\'t have much time to prepare everything in the morning since I have to go to work very early.
I guess I have to find some other healthy foods which are good for me. ^^
Hope you\'ll have a good day tomorrow.
And see you the next day!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I was very busy but it was good thing.
>> correct!
it was warm and sunny and I felt so good.
>> correct! (capitalization)
I went to the library for sutudy and then I went to school for work.
>> I went to the library to study and I went to school to work.
I cleaned my house from 2 to 4 p.m.
>> correct!
I wiped window and refrigerator and so on.
>> I wiped the windows, the refrigerator and so on.
I sarted book sharing meeting today.
>> I had a book sharing meeting today.
What\'s your favorite comfort food?
These day, I am enjoying witch soup which made by vegetables.
>> These days, I am enjoying to eat the witch soup which is made from vegetables.
I will tell you about recipe.
>> I will tell you the recipe.
At first, you boil tomato, carrot, broccoli and cabbage and then you use blender after put it all with apple and banana.
>> First, you have to boil the tomato, carrot, broccoli, and cabbage, then you have to use the blender and put it all with some apple and banana.
It is all.
>> That\'s it!
It you drink it before meal, it will good for your skin, stomach and health.
>> If you will drink it before you have your meal, it will be good for your skin, stomach, and your health.
I have a plan diet through it.
>> I have a diet plan through this meal.
I have to eat only this.
>> I only have to eat this.
Can I do this? Hahaha.
>> correct!
It is comfort food.
>> It is my comfort food.
First of all, it is delicious and healthy.
>> correct!
Would you try it?:)
>> correct!
It\'s a midnight.
>>
I have to get up at 5 a.m.
>>
because I have to go to Seoul.
>>
I go to bed. Bye-bye.
>>
Have a nice a weekend.
>>
It\'s already midnight there I guess.
But before I go to sleep, I have to finish this first. kkkk
Well, I think I can
t try what you have been trying already. hahaha.
I know it\'s healthy but I\'m not used to drinking such kind of food or meal.
And I also don\'t have much time to prepare everything in the morning since I have to go to work very early.
I guess I have to find some other healthy foods which are good for me. ^^
Hope you\'ll have a good day tomorrow.
And see you the next day!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I was very busy but it was good thing.
>> correct!
it was warm and sunny and I felt so good.
>> correct! (capitalization)
I went to the library for sutudy and then I went to school for work.
>> I went to the library to study and I went to school to work.
I cleaned my house from 2 to 4 p.m.
>> correct!
I wiped window and refrigerator and so on.
>> I wiped the windows, the refrigerator and so on.
I sarted book sharing meeting today.
>> I had a book sharing meeting today.
What\'s your favorite comfort food?
These day, I am enjoying witch soup which made by vegetables.
>> These days, I am enjoying to eat the witch soup which is made from vegetables.
I will tell you about recipe.
>> I will tell you the recipe.
At first, you boil tomato, carrot, broccoli and cabbage and then you use blender after put it all with apple and banana.
>> First, you have to boil the tomato, carrot, broccoli, and cabbage, then you have to use the blender and put it all with some apple and banana.
It is all.
>> That\'s it!
It you drink it before meal, it will good for your skin, stomach and health.
>> If you will drink it before you have your meal, it will be good for your skin, stomach, and your health.
I have a plan diet through it.
>> I have a diet plan through this meal.
I have to eat only this.
>> I only have to eat this.
Can I do this? Hahaha.
>> correct!
It is comfort food.
>> It is my comfort food.
First of all, it is delicious and healthy.
>> correct!
Would you try it?:)
>> correct!
It\'s a midnight.
>>
I have to get up at 5 a.m.
>>
because I have to go to Seoul.
>>
I go to bed. Bye-bye.
>>
Have a nice a weekend.
>>
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