Homework;)
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm looking forward to drinking mango beers in Taiwan.
I really love mangoes and any foods including mangoes.
I also heard there are also pineapple beers.
And I hope I could make hilarious memories with my family.
These days, in our classes I really say 'ahhhhhhh' a lot.
And it's really embarrassing to hear it through the records.
It's really hard to express my thinking in English.
But I try my best more when I get back from Taiwan.
Also, I worry about if I can speak English well in Taiwan.(With no ahhhhhhhh)
I think there would be some embarrassing situations while I'm speaking English because communication doesn't get well.
In that case,I think I would be back with more enthusiastic need to study English. Kkkkk
I wish you also have great days including this weekend!!
I think I will miss you;)
Bye;)
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!!!
Though I am certainly gonna miss you for the next days to come, I am happy that you have some
time to spend quality bonding time with your family! :)
May you enjoy it to the fullest and let me know of your exciting events there later^^
Don\'t be such a worrywart about the negative things of speaking the language. Just count all of those into experience.
Smile and have fun!!! I\'m gonna be waiting for you here~~
See you!!!
T.Kristel-
I\'m looking forward to drinking mango beers in Taiwan.
>> CORRECT!!I really love mangoes and any foods including mangoes.
>> I really love mangoes and any foods that have mangoes in them.I also heard there are also pineapple beers.
>> CORRECT!!And I hope I could make hilarious memories with my family.
>> CORRECT!!These days, in our classes I really say \'ahhhhhhh\' a lot.
>> CORRECT!!And it\'s really embarrassing to hear it through the records.
>> CORRECT!!
>> And it\'s really embarrassing to hear it through the recordings.It\'s really hard to express my thinking in English.
>> It\'s really hard to express my thoughts in English.But I try my best more when I get back from Taiwan.
>> But I will try even more when I get back from Taiwan.Also, I worry about if I can speak English well in Taiwan.(With no ahhhhhhhh)
>> Also, I am worried if I can speak English well in Taiwan. (With no ahhhhh)I think there would be some embarrassing situations while I\'m speaking English because communication doesn\'t get well.
>> I think there would be some embarrassing situations while I\'m speaking English because communication may not be smooth.In that case,I think I would be back with more enthusiastic need to study English. Kkkkk
>> CORRECT!!
>> In that case, I think I would be back with more enthusiasm to study English. kkkkI wish you also have great days including this weekend!!
>> CORRECT!!I think I will miss you;)
>> CORRECT!!Bye;)
>> CORRECT!!
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