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2014-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm looking forward to drinking mango beers in Taiwan. I really love mangoes and any foods including mangoes. I also heard there are also pineapple beers. And I hope I could make hilarious memories with my family. These days, in our classes I really say 'ahhhhhhh' a lot. And it's really embarrassing to hear it through the records. It's really hard to express my thinking in English. But I try my best more when I get back from Taiwan. Also, I worry about if I can speak English well in Taiwan.(With no ahhhhhhhh) I think there would be some embarrassing situations while I'm speaking English because communication doesn't get well. In that case,I think I would be back with more enthusiastic need to study English. Kkkkk I wish you also have great days including this weekend!! I think I will miss you;) Bye;)

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!!! Though I am certainly gonna miss you for the next days to come, I am happy that you have some time to spend quality bonding time with your family! :) May you enjoy it to the fullest and let me know of your exciting events there later^^ Don\'t be such a worrywart about the negative things of speaking the language. Just count all of those into experience. Smile and have  fun!!! I\'m gonna be waiting for you here~~ See you!!! T.Kristel- I\'m looking forward to drinking mango beers in Taiwan. >> CORRECT!!I really love mangoes and any foods including mangoes. >> I really love mangoes and any foods that have mangoes in them.I also heard there are also pineapple beers. >> CORRECT!!And I hope I could make hilarious memories with my family. >> CORRECT!!These days, in our classes I really say \'ahhhhhhh\' a lot. >> CORRECT!!And it\'s really embarrassing to hear it through the records. >> CORRECT!! >> And it\'s really embarrassing to hear it through the recordings.It\'s really hard to express my thinking in English. >> It\'s really hard to express my thoughts in English.But I try my best more when I get back from Taiwan. >> But I will try even more when I get back from Taiwan.Also, I worry about if I can speak English well in Taiwan.(With no ahhhhhhhh) >> Also, I am worried if I can speak English well in Taiwan. (With no ahhhhh)I think there would be some embarrassing situations while I\'m speaking English because communication doesn\'t get well. >> I think there would be some embarrassing situations while I\'m speaking English because communication may not be smooth.In that case,I think I would be back with more enthusiastic need to study English. Kkkkk >>  CORRECT!! >> In that case, I think I would be back with more enthusiasm to study English. kkkkI wish you also have great days including this weekend!! >> CORRECT!!I think I will miss you;) >> CORRECT!!Bye;) >> CORRECT!!  

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