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2014-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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What did you get into trouble for the most when you were young? When I was young I have lived country side. Exactly it was until 12 years old. I have a beautiful memorise. However I got into trouble with my younger brothers. They are very cute so I care of them for the most because my parents were busy. On the other hand. my oldest younger brother was tough so he didn't listen to me. Sometime he harass me so we use to fight. He became good brother after army service. Hahaha. He said he will get married on May. What a surprise. And then, when I was adolescent, I just concentrate study so most trouble was from it. On the other hand, I was interest in boys at that time. kkk. I was concerned about my future in connection with study and love.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]!

Thanks for sharing your childhood memories with regards to our topic today.

Well, fighting and quarreling with siblings cannot really be avoided.

I had those kinds of memories too. haha.

Also with being interested with boys and studying.

Gosh! It is good that I able to get rid if those distractions. kkkk.

Well, good luck on your business trip today.
Hope you will have a great day.
See you then tomorrow!
Take care!


Always,

Kathrine ^^



What did you get into trouble for the most when you were young?

When I was young I have lived country side.

>>  When I was young, I lived in the country side.

Exactly it was until 12 years old.

>>  that was 12 years ago.

I have a beautiful memorise.

>> I have beautiful memories.

However I got into trouble with my younger brothers.

>>  correct!

They are very cute so I care of them for the most because my parents were busy.

>>  they are very cute and I take care of them most of the time because my parents were busy.

On the other hand. my oldest younger brother was tough so he didn\'t listen to me.

>>  On the other hand, the oldest of of my younger brothers was tough so he didn\'t listen to me.

Sometime he harass me so we use to fight.

>> Sometimes, he was harassing me so we used to fight.

He became good brother after army service. Hahaha.

>> he became a good brother after he went to the military service. hahaha.

He said he will get married on May.

>> correct!

What a surprise.

>> What a surprise!

And then, when I was adolescent, I just concentrate study so most trouble was from it.

>>  And then when I was an adolescent, I just concentrated on studying so most of my troubles were because of it.

On the other hand, I was interest in boys at that time. kkk.

>>  On the other hand, I was also interested in boys at that time. kkk.

I was concerned about my future in connection with study and love.

>>  I was concerned about my future in connection with studying and being in love.

 

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