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Hi there Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for sharing your childhood memories with regards to our topic today.
Well, fighting and quarreling with siblings cannot really be avoided.
I had those kinds of memories too. haha.
Also with being interested with boys and studying.
Gosh! It is good that I able to get rid if those distractions. kkkk.
Well, good luck on your business trip today.
Hope you will have a great day.
See you then tomorrow!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What did you get into trouble for the most when you were young?
When I was young I have lived country side.
>> When I was young, I lived in the country side.
Exactly it was until 12 years old.
>> that was 12 years ago.
I have a beautiful memorise.
>> I have beautiful memories.
However I got into trouble with my younger brothers.
>> correct!
They are very cute so I care of them for the most because my parents were busy.
>> they are very cute and I take care of them most of the time because my parents were busy.
On the other hand. my oldest younger brother was tough so he didn\'t listen to me.
>> On the other hand, the oldest of of my younger brothers was tough so he didn\'t listen to me.
Sometime he harass me so we use to fight.
>> Sometimes, he was harassing me so we used to fight.
He became good brother after army service. Hahaha.
>> he became a good brother after he went to the military service. hahaha.
He said he will get married on May.
>> correct!
What a surprise.
>> What a surprise!
And then, when I was adolescent, I just concentrate study so most trouble was from it.
>> And then when I was an adolescent, I just concentrated on studying so most of my troubles were because of it.
On the other hand, I was interest in boys at that time. kkk.
>> On the other hand, I was also interested in boys at that time. kkk.
I was concerned about my future in connection with study and love.
>> I was concerned about my future in connection with studying and being in love.
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