homework
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*It some countries people pay different rates of tax depending on their salary, in other countries everyone pays the same rate. Which do you believe is the best system?
In my opinion, to pay different rates of tax depending on their salary is good system.
People earn the money a lot or not.
So it's unfair to pay the same rate.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Sir [이름]!
Thanks for posting your homework again!
I also agree with your opinion about this matter.
The people who earn much more should pay a higher tax rate while those people who have low income should pay lesser tax rate.
See you in class tomorrow!
~~T. Mona
*It some countries people pay different rates of tax depending on their salary, in other countries everyone pays the same rate. Which do you believe is the best system?In my opinion, to pay different rates of tax depending on their salary is good system.
>>In my opinion, to pay different rates of tax depending on their salary is a good system.
People earn the money a lot or not.
>>Some people earn a lot money,some people don\'t.So it\'s unfair to pay the same rate.
>>Correct!
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