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2014-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Mona

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi teacher I always keep my mind on your recommendation. But, It is hard to get into a habit to me Even then, I have to learning english, because, There is a reason for me to learn english. I'll tell you the reason at sometimes. below is homework 1. Despite her parents complants,she decided to live by herself in New York City. 2.If you happen to see your parents this weekend,give them my best regards. 3.I can't understand her when she speaks German with me. 4.He should be ashamed of himself. 5. Mary was worried about the children, sp she convinced his husband not to accept the job abroad. 6. We came across a friend of ours at the mall yesterday. 7. I can't find my pencil, Can I use yours, Mary? 8.I cut myself when I was peeling the potatoes. 9. This house is too expensive for us. We can't pay such a high rent. 10 Each plan has its merits.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름] !

A blissful day again to you.^^

I know that is is hard to learn English but then you can improve by doing constant pratice.

I think that is key.

In this activity, you got only one wrong answer. That is # 5.

In the sentences we are talking about Mary so we should use her not his.

I hope you got it^^

~~T. Mona

Hi teacher

>>Hi teacher! (don\'t forget your punctuation mark)
I always keep my mind on your recommendation.

>>I always keep in mind your recommendations.
But, It is hard to get into a habit to me

>>But it\'s hard to make it a habit.
Even then, I have to learning english, because,There is a reason for me to learn english.
>>Even then, I have to learn English because there is a reason for me to learn it.
I\'ll tell you the reason at sometimes.
>>I\'ll tell you the reason sometimes.
below is homework
>>Below is my homework. (don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of your sentences)

1. Despite her parents complants,she decided to live by herself in New York City.
>>Correct!
2.If you happen to see your parents this weekend,give them my best regards.

>>Correct!
3.I can\'t understand her when she speaks German with me.

>>Correct!
4.He should be ashamed of himself.

>>Correct!
5. Mary was worried about the children, sp she convinced his husband not to accept the job abroad.
>>her

6. We came across a friend of ours at the mall yesterday.

>>Correct!
7. I can\'t find my pencil, Can I use yours, Mary?

>>Correct!
8.I cut myself when I was peeling the potatoes.

>>Correct!
9. This house is too expensive for us. We can\'t pay such a high rent.
>>Correct!
10 Each plan has its merits.
>>Correct!

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