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2014-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello teacher! Thank you for your feedback I really want to overcome this situation. and so, I promise you that I am studing english more hard. Homework. 1.In winter, it is cold and wet. 2. I couldn't really afford it, but I bought it. 3. It was a very long day and I was tired by the end of it. 4. It's an old black and white film. 5. It was an easy test but I failed. 6. She tired hard and managed to do it. 7. The dog looks friendly but he's dangerous. 8.I didnn't like the idea byt agreed to do it. 9. My application was late and they rejected it. 10. It cost a lot of money but I was very disappointed because it didn't work properly. 11.He's a fair but unpleasant man. 12. I was grateful for their help, but a bit embarrassed at having to ask to borrow the money.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

How are you doing?

I hope everything is fine.

Well, thanks for answering your homework.
You did a very good job.

But of course, please do not forget to review the corrections I have written below.
See you again tomorrow.

Take care!

T. Mona ^^

Hello teacher!

>>  correct! 
 Thank you for your feedback

>>  correct! (end punctuation)
 I really want to overcome this situation.

>>  correct! 
 and so, I promise you that I am studing english more hard.
>>  And so I promise you that I am going to study English harder.
 Homework.
1.In winter, it is cold and wet.

>> correct!
 2. I couldn\'t really afford it, but I bought it.

>>  and
 3. It was a very long day and I was tired by the end of it.

>>  correct! 
 4. It\'s an old black and white film.

>>  but
 5. It was an easy test but I failed.

>>  correct! 
 6. She tired hard and managed to do it.

>>  correct! 
 7. The dog looks friendly but he\'s dangerous.

>>  correct! 
 8.I didnn\'t like the idea byt agreed to do it.

>>  correct! (but)
 9. My application was late and they rejected it.

>>  correct! 
 10. It cost a lot of money but I was very disappointed because it didn\'t work properly.

>>  and
 11.He\'s a fair but unpleasant man.

>>  correct! 
 12. I was grateful for their help, but a bit embarrassed at having to ask to borrow the money.

>>  correct!

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