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2014-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Essay: If you were an inventor, what thing are you going to invent? or, If you were a scientist, what problem would you work on? -> If I were an inventor, I would invent time-machine. So I will go in past to earn much money and to study many fields. I regret that I spend my many time playing with my friends and drinking. But I have much time in future. I would like to live hard so that I make use of my rest time. Thank you for reading my essay. P.S) Hi~ beautiful Kathrine~ I have two question. First In the near end of today class, I don't know you said "What she happy?". Second I wonder the difference of pronunciation between "often" and "open". Thank you for your teaching today. Have a nice weekend~ See you later~ Bye~

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!

Thank you for calling me beautiful! hahaha.

I love it. kkk

I\'m flattered. (~_~)

Well, the pronunciation of the word \"open\" is \"[oh-puhn]\".

The \"P\" sound should be heard clearly.

While the word \"often\" is \"[aw-fuhn, of-uhn; awf-tuhn, of-]

The \"F\" sound should be as clear as possible.

The difference is between the \"P\" and the \"F\" sound.

So have time to practice it and I hope you will get it perfectly.

Thanks for your question.

I know what you have been through this whole week.
You had a tough time at work though it is still your vacation.
So I hope that you will be able to have a good rest this weekend.
Enjoy your free time and see you again next week.
Have fun and take care!

Always,
Kathrine ^^



HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:

Essay: If you were an inventor, what thing are you going to invent? or, If you were a scientist, what problem would you work on?


 If I were an inventor, I would invent time-machine.

>>  If I were an inventor, I would invent the time machine.
 So I will go in past to earn much money and to study many fields.

>>  So I will go back in the past, earn much money and study many fields.
 I regret that I spend my many time playing with my friends and drinking.

>>  I regretted that I spent a lot of my time playing and drinking with my friends.
 But I have much time in future. 

>> But I have so much time in the future
 I would like to live hard so that I make use of my rest time.

>>  I would like to live hard so that I could make use of my time to rest.
 Thank you for reading my essay.
>>  correct!
P.S)
Hi~ beautiful Kathrine~

>>  Hi beautiful Kathrine! 
 I have one question.

>>  correct! 

>> or: I have a question.
 I wonder the difference of pronunciation between \"often\" and \"open\".

>>  I wonder the difference in the pronunciation of \"often\" and \"open.\"
 Thank you for your teaching today.

>>  Thank you for teaching me today.
 Have a nice weekend~

>>  correct!
 See you later~

>>  correct!
 Bye~

>>  correct!

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