homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for calling me beautiful! hahaha.
I love it. kkk
I\'m flattered. (~_~)
Well, the pronunciation of the word \"open\" is \"[oh-puhn]\".
The \"P\" sound should be heard clearly.
While the word \"often\" is \"[aw-fuhn, of-uhn; awf-tuhn, of-]
The \"F\" sound should be as clear as possible.
The difference is between the \"P\" and the \"F\" sound.
So have time to practice it and I hope you will get it perfectly.
Thanks for your question.
I know what you have been through this whole week.
You had a tough time at work though it is still your vacation.
So I hope that you will be able to have a good rest this weekend.
Enjoy your free time and see you again next week.
Have fun and take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Essay: If you were an inventor, what thing are you going to invent? or, If you were a scientist, what problem would you work on?
If I were an inventor, I would invent time-machine.
>> If I were an inventor, I would invent the time machine.
So I will go in past to earn much money and to study many fields.
>> So I will go back in the past, earn much money and study many fields.
I regret that I spend my many time playing with my friends and drinking.
>> I regretted that I spent a lot of my time playing and drinking with my friends.
But I have much time in future.
>> But I have so much time in the future
I would like to live hard so that I make use of my rest time.
>> I would like to live hard so that I could make use of my time to rest.
Thank you for reading my essay.
>> correct!
P.S)
Hi~ beautiful Kathrine~
>> Hi beautiful Kathrine!
I have one question.
>> correct!
>> or: I have a question.
I wonder the difference of pronunciation between \"often\" and \"open\".
>> I wonder the difference in the pronunciation of \"often\" and \"open.\"
Thank you for your teaching today.
>> Thank you for teaching me today.
Have a nice weekend~
>> correct!
See you later~
>> correct!
Bye~
>> correct!
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