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My Coran Angel fish is growing.
Its color is changing too.
Mushroom coral is growing too.
Some are became brown colors.
My 24cube salt water fish tank becoming full because of fishes and coral.
I'll put Acan coral and brain coral if i pass the chineese contest.
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Good afternoon to you Tom!
T.G.I.F!!! Yipee!! We\'re down to the end of the line again. Time really flies fast!
Wow! You have a big fish tank. I hope to have one too, but it is expensive. Hihihi!
I am curious about the corals you mentioned below. I\'ve never seen those corals yet.
I am sure you are going to pass the Chinese contest because you really studied hard for it.
Think positive! You made good sentences again. Amazing!
I encourage you to keep on writing an essay or compose at least two or three sentences everyday.
See you in class! Enjoy the rest of the day!
Teacher Nina
My Coran Angel fish is growing.
>> Correct
>> OR: My fish called Coran Angel is growing.Its color is changing too.
>> Correct
Mushroom coral is growing too.
>> The mushroom coral is growing too.Some are became brown colors.
>> Some of them became brown.>> OR: Some of them turned into brown. My 24cube salt water fish tank becoming full because of fishes and coral.
>> My 24 inch cube salt water fish tank is becoming full because of fishes and corals. I\'ll put Acan coral and brain coral if i pass the chineese contest.
>> I\'ll put an Acan coral and Brain coral if I pass the Chinese contest.
>> OR: I will put an Acan coral and Brain coral if will get a high score in the Chinese contest.
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