homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there again Mr. [이름]! :p)
Well, I do now understand why you are in the toilet during our class.
Was that a guy friend or a girl friend of yours? I\'m confused. really.. kkk
Anyway, I had a great weekend. Thanks for asking.
Basically, learning English is really a must especially to those non-English speaking countries.
Not only in your country but I guess also in my country.
English is the international language so it is necessary to learn English.
Learning English is not for young people only.
It is for everybody to learn.
English is not needed only to find a job but it is needed in many things.
Like when you go on a travel, when a foreigner asks you for a direction, etc.
So learning English is not too late for you.
You can use it in many ways.
Thanks for today and hope you will have a good day.
See you again tomorrow.
Always,
Kathrine ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: Most students say they are studying English in order to get a better job in the future. Do you think the focus on English in the job market is a good one?
Nowadays, English becomes an international language more and more around the world.
>> Nowadays, English is coming an international language around the world.
Also English is the most important subject and skill in S.Korea.
>> English is also the most important subject and skill in South Korea.
I think everyone will learn Engish in order to have a better living quality.
>> I think that everyone will leanr English in order to have a better quality of living.
English is not necessay but essential.
>> English is not necessary but it is essential.
Hi~ KathrinE
>> Hi Kathrine!
Did you enjoy your happy weekend?
>> correct!
>> or: Did you enjoy your weekend?
Today, in the morning my boyfriend visited my house and was having a breakfast(?) in my room.
>> This morning, my friend visited me at home as he/she was having breakfast in my room.
So i went to toilet because I was ashamed of doing phone english conversation.
>> So I went to the toilet because I was ashamed of having an English conversation over the phone.
I am sorry to have a conversation in toilet.
>> I am sorry to have a conversation with you in the toilet.
Have a good day.
>> correct!
See you tomorrow.
>> correct!
Bye Bye~
>> correct!
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