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Well, thanks for doing your composition and for sharing your thoughts with regards to our topic.
Basically, learning English is really a must especially to those non-English speaking countries.
Not only in your country but I guess also in my country.
English is the international language so it is necessary to learn English.
Learning English is not for young people only.
It is for everybody to learn.
English is not needed only to find a job but it is needed in many things.
Like when you go on a travel, when a foreigner asks you for a direction, etc.
So learning English is not too late for you and for other people too.
You can use it in many ways as what you have said.
Thanks again and have a great night!
Take a goodnight rest!
See you tomorrow! :p)
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Most students say they are studying English in order to get a better job in the future. Do you think the focus on English in the job market is a good one?
We are living in the global ages so English is necessary.
>> correct!
This is because we have to exchange something together in English.
>> This is because we have to exchnage communication in English.
Earth is small town now and we need common language.
>> The earth is getting smaller and we need a common language.
I think English is that one.
>> correct!
Most company want skill of Englihs so younger generation can\'t escape the score.
>> Most companies want a skill in English so the younger generation can\'t scape it.
Actually, some job doesn\'t want to have the score but we know English is basic.
>> Actually, some jobs don\'t want to have the score but we know that English is basic.
In my case, English score was not important to get a job but I need it for getting a better chance.
>> In my case, English score was not important to get a job but I need it to get a better chance.
In Korea, if someone have a high English score, they can get a better job.
>> In Korea, if someone has a high English score, they can get a better job.
It can\'t be helped.
>> correct!
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