homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
How are you doing now Mr. [이름]?
Hope you are still doing well at work.
It\'s almost half of the day and I know you want the day to end already.
Me too. kkk
Well, I guess you call it cheating when you use your \"power\" just to succeed in life.
Isn\'t it? hahaha.
But anyway, I do not believe that a certain kind of person can read people\'s mind or know about their future.
What I believe is that every people makes their own future and nobody could dictate what will happen.
And I do that you just have to do your best today so that you will succeed in the future.
Anyway, thanks for sharing your thoughts again with regards to our topic.
See you tomorrow.
Enjoy the rest of the day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Composition:
Would you rather be able to read everyone\'s mind all the time or always know their future?
I want to read everyones\'s mind because it is a strong weapon in life.
>> correct!
Almost everyone hide their own minds since hesitate to show their real shape.
>> Almost everyone hides their own mind since they hesitate to show their real self.
>> or: Almost everyone is hiding their own mind since they are hesitating to show their real self.
So we don\'t know anyone else exept me.
>> correct! (spelling correction-except)
To read other\'s mind is definetly heplful for me so that I will success in my field.
>> To read other\'s mind is definitely helpful for me so that I will succeed in my field.
>> or: To read someone else\'s mind is definitely helpful for me so that I will succeed in my field.
But it is impossible in real life.
>> correct!
Thefore I will do my best today, too. thanks.
>> correct!
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