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Hello teacher ~ today homework is that "Do you like family gatherings?" yeah I like family gathering. ti is because that it is a chance to eat a delicious food and to meet a greeting person. there is family gathering at korea holiday. and special TV show is taken at TV. it is very funny. so my family always watch TV with together at holiday. at holiday, we prepare a food for a relative before holiday. something like Soup, Korea Pancake, Stake, etc. each family member is charged to prepare a food. because there are so many food to be prepared at holiday. preparing food is sometimes hard, but it is very fun. we can talk each other during a preparing food. That is why i like family gathering. That's all^^ thank you see you~

Hi! Good evening Ji Hoon, Thank you for sending your composition. I really appreciate your time and effort in making it. Please check the following corrections I\'ve made for you. I hope that this will help you a lot.   T. Barbara^^,   Hello teacher ~ >> Correct!today homework is that \"Do you like family gatherings?\" >> Today\'s homework is: \"Do you like family gatherings?\"yeah I like family gathering. >> Yes, I like family gathering. ti is because that it is a chance to eat a delicious food and to meet a greeting person.>> It is because it is a chance to eat delicious foods and  we can meet and greet our relatives.  there is family gathering at korea holiday. >> There is afamily gathering during Korean holiday.and special TV show is taken at TV. >> There is a special holiday shown on TV. it is very funny. >> It is very funny. so my family always watch TV with together at holiday.>> My family always watch TV together during holiday.at holiday, we prepare a food for a relative before holiday. >> On holiday, we prepare a food for our relatives before the holiday. something like Soup, Korea Pancake, Stake, etc. >> It is a food that is like soup, Korean pancake, steak, etc.each family member is charged to prepare a food. >> Each family member is in charge to prepare a food. because there are so many food to be prepared at holiday. >> It is because there are so many food to be prepared on holiday. preparing food is sometimes hard, but it is very fun. >> Preparing food is sometimes hard but it is very fun. we can talk each other during a preparing food.>> We can talk to each other while preparing food.That is why i like family gathering.>> That is why I like family gathering.That\'s all^^ >> Correct!thank you >> Thank you.see you~ >> See you~