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2014-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I must give peace to my friends. then friends became best friends. I have a lot of best friends. If I don't a peace, I can't make best friends.

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Good afternoon Tom! I am so happy that you made your homework! Thank you so much for extending your class again with me! I agree with you! IF yuo don\'t give or show peace to others, we can\'t make friends. You are really a great person! Keep up the good attitude! See you in class!Teacher Nina   I must give peace to my friends. >> Correct! >> OR: I must show peace to my friends. then friends became best friends. >> So my friends will be my best friends. I have a lot of best friends. >> Correct >> OR: I have many best friends. If I don\'t a peace, I can\'t make best friends. >> If I don\'t show peace to others, I can\'t make best friends. >> OR: If I don\'t give peace to others, I can\'t make best friends.

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