homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I must give peace to my friends.
then friends became best friends.
I have a lot of best friends.
If I don't a peace, I can't make best friends.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Tom!
I am so happy that you made your homework!
Thank you so much for extending your class again with me!
I agree with you! IF yuo don\'t give or show peace to others, we can\'t make friends.
You are really a great person! Keep up the good attitude!
See you in class!Teacher Nina
I must give peace to my friends.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I must show peace to my friends.
then friends became best friends.
>> So my friends will be my best friends. I have a lot of best friends.
>> Correct
>> OR: I have many best friends. If I don\'t a peace, I can\'t make best friends.
>> If I don\'t show peace to others, I can\'t make best friends.
>> OR: If I don\'t give peace to others, I can\'t make best friends.
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