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2014-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Would you rather be able to read everyone's mind all the time or always know their future? Sometime, I want to know everyone's mind since I make a mistake because of misunderstand. Plus, when I was fall in love, I wondered his mind wheather he love me and how much love me. kkk. But I don't want to know that one. This is because I know that everyone's mind is very complex so I will tired for that reason. I think unknowing is better. Frankly, everyday I should know peoples' mind. All of thing is cummunication. If I know my student's mind, I can control them well. I have a temtation about that is mind reading. However, I'd like to refuse it.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]!

Great Friday morning to you!

Well, reading someone else\'s mind is quite weird for me and I don\'t even want to do it.
Even if I am curious is what other people think about me.

Anyway, thanks for sharing you opinion about our topic.
And thanks for today too.
See you next week!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


Would you rather be able to read everyone\'s mind all the time or always know their future?

Sometime, I want to know everyone\'s mind since I make a mistake because of misunderstand.

>>  Sometimes, I want to know everyone\'s mind since I make a mistake because of misunderstanding.

>> Sometimes, I want to know everyone\'s thinking since I am making a mistake because of misunderstanding.

Plus, when I was fall in love, I wondered his mind wheather he love me and how much love me. kkk.

>> Plus when I fell in love, I wondered about what he was thinking whether he loves me or how much he loves me. kkk

But I don\'t want to know that one.

>>  correct!

This is because I know that everyone\'s mind is very complex so I will tired for that reason.

>>  This is because I know that everyone\'s mind is very complex so I will get tired for that reason.

I think unknowing is better.

>>  I think that knowing nothing is better.

Frankly, everyday I should know peoples\' mind.

>>  correct!

All of thing is cummunication.

>>  All things is about communication.

If I know my student\'s mind, I can control them well.

>>  correct!

I have a temtation about that is mind reading.

>>  I am tempted that it is like reading their minds.

However, I\'d like to refuse it.

>>  correct!

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