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2014-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Composition: What's one characteristic that people can either love about you, or hate? First, my characteristic that people love about me is diligence and positive. I always try to think everything positively and enjoy my work though it is very hard for me. So people like me because of these. Second, people's hating my characteristic is to like drinking. I don't smoke but I love drinking(soju) with delicious foods. So I have tried reducing my drinking but it is difficult. Hi Kathrine~ I always appreciate your teaching me. I think that my english conversation ability grows up more and more owing to you. Enjoy your happy weekend. But I will work hard this weekend.(sad) Thank you very much. See you next monday~ Bye~~

강사 첨삭

Hello there Mr. [이름]! :p)

I\'m really sorry to here that you have to go to work this weekend.
I didn\'t know about it.
All I thought is that you are working form Monday to Friday only.
Anyway, just enjoy your free time this weekend though you have to go to work.

And I am happy that you have noticed that you have improved in your speaking ability.
I also noticed that.
You already gained confidence and that what I want you to continue.
Stay confident and do not forget to practice.
This will help you a lot.

I am happy that you appreciate the way I teach you.
Thank you! Kamsahamnida!! ~_~

I am very sure then that as time goes by, you will be a good speaker.
See you then on Monday!

Enjoy the rest of the day!

Always,
Kathrine ^^


HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Composition: What\'s one characteristic that people can either love about you, or hate?


 First, my characteristic that people love about me is diligence and positive.

>> First, the characteristics that people love about are my diligence and positivity.

I always try to think everything positively and enjoy my work though it is very hard for me.

>> correct!

>> or: I am always trying to think about everything positively and to enjoy my work though it\'s hard for me.

So people like me because of these.

>> correct!
 Second, people\'s hating my characteristic is to like drinking.

>> Second, the characteristic that people hate about me is that I like drinking/ to drink.

I don\'t smoke but I love drinking(soju) with delicious foods.

>> correct!

So I have tried reducing my drinking but it is difficult.
>> So I have tried to reduce drinking but it is difficult.
Hi Kathrine~

>> correct!
 I always appreciate your teaching me.

>> I always appreciate your teaching to me.
 I think that my english conversation ability grows up more and more owing to you.

>> I think that my English speaking ability is improving and I owe it to you.
 Enjoy your happy weekend.

>> correct!

But I will work hard this weekend.(sad)

>> correct! 
 Thank you very much.

>> correct!

See you next monday~

>> correct! 
 Bye~~

>> correct!

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