homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Mr. [이름]! :p)
I\'m really sorry to here that you have to go to work this weekend.
I didn\'t know about it.
All I thought is that you are working form Monday to Friday only.
Anyway, just enjoy your free time this weekend though you have to go to work.
And I am happy that you have noticed that you have improved in your speaking ability.
I also noticed that.
You already gained confidence and that what I want you to continue.
Stay confident and do not forget to practice.
This will help you a lot.
I am happy that you appreciate the way I teach you.
Thank you! Kamsahamnida!! ~_~
I am very sure then that as time goes by, you will be a good speaker.
See you then on Monday!
Enjoy the rest of the day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Composition: What\'s one characteristic that people can either love about you, or hate?
First, my characteristic that people love about me is diligence and positive.
>> First, the characteristics that people love about are my diligence and positivity.
I always try to think everything positively and enjoy my work though it is very hard for me.
>> correct!
>> or: I am always trying to think about everything positively and to enjoy my work though it\'s hard for me.
So people like me because of these.
>> correct!
Second, people\'s hating my characteristic is to like drinking.
>> Second, the characteristic that people hate about me is that I like drinking/ to drink.
I don\'t smoke but I love drinking(soju) with delicious foods.
>> correct!
So I have tried reducing my drinking but it is difficult.
>> So I have tried to reduce drinking but it is difficult.
Hi Kathrine~
>> correct!
I always appreciate your teaching me.
>> I always appreciate your teaching to me.
I think that my english conversation ability grows up more and more owing to you.
>> I think that my English speaking ability is improving and I owe it to you.
Enjoy your happy weekend.
>> correct!
But I will work hard this weekend.(sad)
>> correct!
Thank you very much.
>> correct!
See you next monday~
>> correct!
Bye~~
>> correct!
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