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2014-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.lend 2.borrow 3.borrow 4.lend 5.borrow 6.borrow 7.lend 8.lend 9.lend 10.lend I was chosen to be the classroom president. I pick up trashes, I attend the school meeting. I'll work hard for my school. I'm so proud of myself.

강사 첨삭

A special Friday to you Tom! Wow! Really?  Congratulations!!! I am really proud of you! I know that you will be a really good president.^^ So, what are your plans for your class? You did an awesome job with your homework too.^^ This calls for a celebration! Treat yourself this weekend, okay? Can\'t wait to talk to you. See you!Teacher Nina   1.lend >> Correct! 2.borrow >> Correct! 3.borrow >> lend 4.lend >> Correct! 5.borrow >> Correct! 6.borrow >> Correct! 7.lend >> Correct! 8.lend >> borrow9.lend >> Correct! 10.lend>> Correct! I was chosen to be the classroom president. >> Correct! >> OR: I was picked by my the majority in my classroom to be the president in my class. I pick up trashes, I attend the school meeting. >> I picked up some trash and attended the school meeting. I\'ll work hard for my school. >> Correct! >> OR: I will work hard for the benefit of my school. I\'m so proud of myself. >> Correct!

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