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2014-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Barbara

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Hello teacher~ Today's weather is so goooood ~ so I hope to play anything with my friends on outside Today's homework is interpreting my opinion about this :'H is for Habit, winners make a habit of doing the things losers don't want to do.' I absolutely agree this quotation. I think the winner need a habit that is waking up early in the morning. The people who wake up early in the morning can do many thing, because they can have many time. On the other hand, the people who don't wake up early can be lazy and can not have many time. waking up early is so difficult for me, because I usually go to bed too late. i usually go to bed at 2 AM But nowaday I must wake up early in the morning, because I should take a class in the morning, so I will effort a waking up early. That's all Have a nice day teacher^^~ See you later!

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday Ji Hoon!   Thank you for sending this in. You are such a diligent student. You find time to accomplish your tasks. That\'s a good start so, keep it up! That\'s true! It is hard to wake up in the morning. You just need to keep in mind that you must wake up. Kkk...   T. Barbara^^,   Hello teacher~ >> Correct!Today\'s weather is so goooood ~ >> Today\'s weather is so good.so I hope to play anything with my friends on outside>> So i hope to play anything with my friends outside.Today\'s homework is interpreting my opinion about this :\'H is for Habit, winners make a habit of doing the things losers don\'t want to do.\' >> Today\'s homework is interpreting this quotation: \'H is for Habit, winners make a habit of doing the things losers don\'t want to do.\'I absolutely agree this quotation. >> I absolutely agree in the quotation. I think the winner need a habit that is waking up early in the morning. >> I think the winner needs a habit that is waking up earlt in the morning.The people who wake up early in the morning can do many thing, because they can have many time. >>The people who wakes up in the morning can do many things because they have a lot of time. On the other hand, the people who don\'t wake up early can be lazy and can not have many time.>> On the other hand, the people who don\'t wake up early can be lazy and they don\'t have a lot of time.waking up early is so difficult for me, because I usually go to bed too late. >> Waking up early is so difficult fo me because I usually go to bed late.  i usually go to bed at 2 AM >> I usually go to bed at 2 am.But nowaday I must wake up early in the morning, because I should take a class in the morning, so I will effort a waking up early.>> But nowadays, I must wake up early in the morning because I should attend a class in the morning so, I will make an effort waking up early.That\'s all >> That\'s all.Have a nice day teacher^^~ >> Correct!See you later! >> Correct!

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