Homework
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What's one characteristic that people can either love about you, or hate?
Well, sometime people said I am always smailing. This is because I think smile is important so I try to do that. Acquaintance seem to like this so I get along with anyone. I show only my good things to people. I don't like to say about my problem seriously. On the other hand, it was difficult to make friends. Now a days I tell my troubles. By the way. I think I can't say about all my things and it is not good. But I don't know which is better. I just prefer having a secret alone. Hahaha. Finally, I have a both sides in my charater. Sometime it is good side but it is bad side. But I am what I am so I can't change easily.
강사 첨삭
Great Sunday evening Ms. [Name]! :)
Thanks for finding time to do your composition.
Well, all I can say is that, you cannot please everybody.
And you cannot be the person that everybody will love.
You are your own.
And of course you have to be. No pretentions.
And I know that you are true to yourself and to every people.
It maybe just depends on the situation.
Anyway, you are a great person Ms. [Name], inside and out. ^^
See you tomorrow!
Have a great evening and a good night sleep!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What\'s one characteristic that people can either love about you, or hate?
Well, sometime people said I am always smailing.
>> Well, sometimes people say that I am always smiling.
This is because I think smile is important so I try to do that.
>> This because I think that smiling is important so I a trying to do that.
Acquaintance seem to like this so I get along with anyone.
>> My acquaintances seem to like this so I am getting along with anyone.
I show only my good things to people.
>> I only show the good things about me to people.
I don\'t like to say about my problem seriously.
>> correct!
On the other hand, it was difficult to make friends.
>> correct!
Now a days I tell my troubles.
>> I am telling my troubles nowadays.
By the way. I think I can\'t say about all my things and it is not good.
>> By the way, I think that I can\'t say all about the things which are not good.
But I don\'t know which is better.
>> correct!
I just prefer having a secret alone. Hahaha.
>> correct!
Finally, I have a both sides in my charater.
>> Finally, I have both sides of my character.
Sometime it is good side but it is bad side.
>> Sometimes, it is the good side and the bad side.
But I am what I am so I can\'t change easily.
>> But I am who I am so I can\'t change it easily.
Thanks for finding time to do your composition.
Well, all I can say is that, you cannot please everybody.
And you cannot be the person that everybody will love.
You are your own.
And of course you have to be. No pretentions.
And I know that you are true to yourself and to every people.
It maybe just depends on the situation.
Anyway, you are a great person Ms. [Name], inside and out. ^^
See you tomorrow!
Have a great evening and a good night sleep!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What\'s one characteristic that people can either love about you, or hate?
Well, sometime people said I am always smailing.
>> Well, sometimes people say that I am always smiling.
This is because I think smile is important so I try to do that.
>> This because I think that smiling is important so I a trying to do that.
Acquaintance seem to like this so I get along with anyone.
>> My acquaintances seem to like this so I am getting along with anyone.
I show only my good things to people.
>> I only show the good things about me to people.
I don\'t like to say about my problem seriously.
>> correct!
On the other hand, it was difficult to make friends.
>> correct!
Now a days I tell my troubles.
>> I am telling my troubles nowadays.
By the way. I think I can\'t say about all my things and it is not good.
>> By the way, I think that I can\'t say all about the things which are not good.
But I don\'t know which is better.
>> correct!
I just prefer having a secret alone. Hahaha.
>> correct!
Finally, I have a both sides in my charater.
>> Finally, I have both sides of my character.
Sometime it is good side but it is bad side.
>> Sometimes, it is the good side and the bad side.
But I am what I am so I can\'t change easily.
>> But I am who I am so I can\'t change it easily.
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