homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your favorite "space"?
My favorite space is my room in Japan.
I'm living very close to school which takes only about 10 minutes from my home.
It is very special in that it is my first rooom I've chosen to live for myself !!!
In fact, I've lived in several small dormitoriy rooms which were very inconvenient to live.
My current room is more spacious compared to those prior rooms.
For I like girly and elegant style, most of my room's stuffs are in pink colors.
Although there are some limits to decorate since it is rented and I can not afford to equip my room with all those high-tech electric goods and chic interior goods, I'am fully enjoying to rearrange my room everyday.
Above all, I love this place since I am without disturbance in this room !!!
I am free as a bird! I sing and dance whenever I want to.. lol
I hope to have my own home someday where I can do anything I want and invest many things than now.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition! You did a great job in writing this. In my case, my bedroom is also my favorite space because it\'s where I can take some rest. When I\'m in my room nobody and nothing can ever disturb me. It\'s my sanctuary.
T. JanE ^^
What is your favorite \"space\"? >> Correct My favorite space is my room in Japan. >> Correct
I\'m living very close to school which takes only about 10 minutes from my home. >> Correct
It is very special in that it is my first room I\'ve chosen to live for myself !!!>> It is very special because it is the first room I\'ve chosen to live in by myself. In fact, I\'ve lived in several small dormitory rooms which were very inconvenient to live.>> Correct My current room is more spacious compared to those prior rooms. >> Correct
For I like girly and elegant style, most of my room\'s stuffs are in pink colors. >> Correct
Although there are some limits to decorate since it is rented and I can not afford to equip my room with all those high-tech electric goods and chic interior goods, I am fully enjoying to rearrange my room everyday.>> Correct Above all, I love this place since I am without disturbance in this room !!!>> Correct
I am free as a bird!
>> Correct I sing and dance whenever I want to.. lol>> Correct I hope to have my own home someday where I can do anything I want and invest many things than now. >> Correct
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