homework

2014-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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List three things you need, even though they have come less popular and why? First, I need a English conversation ability because I want to teach students English and my hobby is learning something. Second, I need money to buy a house. These days, a house is too expensive to buy. So I'm renting my house. Third, I need practicing. Nowaday I have few free time to practice. So I am fatting more and more. Hi Kathrine~ Did you have a happy weekend? Where are you living? Korea? Philippine? I'm wodering. Some days ago, I have a mistake and say my wrong birthday date. Tomorrow is my birthday(March, tenth). Thank you for teaching. Have a good time. See you later~ bye~

강사 첨삭

Great noon Mr. [이름]!

Have you eaten your lunch already?

I hope. Do not miss you lunch! kkk

Well, I had a good weekend.

I went to the hair salon and I had a hair cut.
Now I have a short hair. ^^

And I also went out with some of my friends. We had a good time too.

Anyway, I would like to greet you an advance happy birthday!  

saeng-il chukha hamnida!!!

I will sing for you tomorrow (in Korean). I need to practice first. hahaha.

I wish you all the best and all the blessings in life.

Oh my God, you are a year older again Mr. [이름]!!

Time is running fast.

I guess the thing that you have to do are:
First, find a girlfriend.
Second, buy a house.
Third, get married.

Isn\'t it right? kkkkk :p)

What is your plan for your birthday?

Tell me more about that tomorrow.

See you! Enjoy your day!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


List three things you need, even though they have come less popular and why?

First, I need a English conversation ability because I want to teach students English and my hobby is learning something.

>>  First, I need to have an English speaking ability because I want to teach my student sin English and my hobby is learning something/ to learn something.
 Second, I need money to buy a house.

>>  correct!

These days, a house is too expensive to buy.

>>  correct!

So I\'m renting my house.

>>  correct!
 Third, I need practicing.

>>  correct!

>> Third, I need to practice!

>> or: do you mean: I need time to exercise.

Nowaday I have few free time to practice.

>>  Nowadays, I have a little time to practice.
>> or: Nowadays, I don\'t have enough time to practice.

So I am fatting more and more.
>>  So I\'m becoming fat. 

>> or; So I\'m gaining more weight.
 Hi Kathrine~

>>  correct!
 Did you have a happy weekend?

>>  correct! 
 Where are you living? Korea? Philippine?

>>  Where are you living? Is it in Korea or in the Philippines?
 I\'m wodering.

>>  I\'m wondering about that.
 Some days ago, I have a mistake and say my wrong birthday date.

>>  A few days ago, I made a mistake and I have said a wrong date of my birthday.

Tomorrow is my birthday(March, tenth). 

>>  Tomorrow is my birthday, March 10.
 Thank you for teaching.

>> Thank you for teaching me.   
 Have a good time.

>>  correct! 
 See you later~ bye~

>>  correct!

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