homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Great noon Mr. [이름]!
Have you eaten your lunch already?
I hope. Do not miss you lunch! kkk
Well, I had a good weekend.
I went to the hair salon and I had a hair cut.
Now I have a short hair. ^^
And I also went out with some of my friends. We had a good time too.
Anyway, I would like to greet you an advance happy birthday!
saeng-il chukha hamnida!!!
I will sing for you tomorrow (in Korean). I need to practice first. hahaha.
I wish you all the best and all the blessings in life.
Oh my God, you are a year older again Mr. [이름]!!
Time is running fast.
I guess the thing that you have to do are:
First, find a girlfriend.
Second, buy a house.
Third, get married.
Isn\'t it right? kkkkk :p)
What is your plan for your birthday?
Tell me more about that tomorrow.
See you! Enjoy your day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
List three things you need, even though they have come less popular and why?
First, I need a English conversation ability because I want to teach students English and my hobby is learning something.
>> First, I need to have an English speaking ability because I want to teach my student sin English and my hobby is learning something/ to learn something.
Second, I need money to buy a house.
>> correct!
These days, a house is too expensive to buy.
>> correct!
So I\'m renting my house.
>> correct!
Third, I need practicing.
>> correct!
>> Third, I need to practice!
>> or: do you mean: I need time to exercise.
Nowaday I have few free time to practice.
>> Nowadays, I have a little time to practice.
>> or: Nowadays, I don\'t have enough time to practice.
So I am fatting more and more.
>> So I\'m becoming fat.
>> or; So I\'m gaining more weight.
Hi Kathrine~
>> correct!
Did you have a happy weekend?
>> correct!
Where are you living? Korea? Philippine?
>> Where are you living? Is it in Korea or in the Philippines?
I\'m wodering.
>> I\'m wondering about that.
Some days ago, I have a mistake and say my wrong birthday date.
>> A few days ago, I made a mistake and I have said a wrong date of my birthday.
Tomorrow is my birthday(March, tenth).
>> Tomorrow is my birthday, March 10.
Thank you for teaching.
>> Thank you for teaching me.
Have a good time.
>> correct!
See you later~ bye~
>> correct!
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