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2014-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Becca

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I liked begore blockbuster movies. But now, I don't like the world's movies. Because the world's media has not beautiful. I go around the church and I broke the world news, movies, and music. All kinds of crimes and perverted, nonsensical things that I do not want praise. I wait on March 20 released movie 'Noah'in Korea .

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]!   Thanks for doing this one. I appreciate your time and effort in making your homework, even at weekends :) Feel free to review the following corrections that I gave you. See you in class  :) ~Teacher Becca~ Here are some corrections: I liked begore blockbuster movies. >> I liked blockbuster movies before. >> Before, I like blockbuster movies. But now, I don\'t like the world\'s movies. >> But now, I don\'t like international movies. Because the world\'s media has not beautiful. >> Because nowadays, international media doesn\'t always impose good stories and information. I go around the church and I broke the world news, movies, and music. >> By going to church, I was able to focus on more crucial things than news, movies, and music.  All kinds of crimes and perverted, nonsensical things that I do not want praise. >> Away from all kinds of perversed, absurd things that I don\'t want to know about. I wait on March 20 released movie \'Noah\'in Korea . >> I am waiting for the release of the movie \"Noah\" on March 20 in Korea.

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