homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I liked begore blockbuster movies. But now, I don't like the world's movies. Because the world's media has not beautiful. I go around the church and I broke the world news, movies, and music. All kinds of crimes and perverted, nonsensical things that I do not want praise. I wait on March 20 released movie 'Noah'in Korea .
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Becca~
Here are some corrections:
I liked begore blockbuster movies.
>> I liked blockbuster movies before.
>> Before, I like blockbuster movies.
But now, I don\'t like the world\'s movies.
>> But now, I don\'t like international movies.
Because the world\'s media has not beautiful.
>> Because nowadays, international media doesn\'t always impose good stories and information.
I go around the church and I broke the world news, movies, and music.
>> By going to church, I was able to focus on more crucial things than news, movies, and music.
All kinds of crimes and perverted, nonsensical things that I do not want praise.
>> Away from all kinds of perversed, absurd things that I don\'t want to know about.
I wait on March 20 released movie \'Noah\'in Korea .
>> I am waiting for the release of the movie \"Noah\" on March 20 in Korea.
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