homework

Hello teacher~ Today is little bit cold, so I'm wearing a thick coat. Anyway, be careful not to catch a cold^^ Today's homework is : What comes to mind when you hear the word 'adolescence'? adolescence is very important to all, because we can make life-time friends. Until now, I usually meet my friends who was met at high school, and we used to talking about our story of high school. They are so precious for me, and we are always assist each other, when anyone has a problem. And in korea, we have to study hard for a entrance exam of university. university is important to korean, so they are always study hard. I'm not agree this situation. but a number of people is study for university. purpose of study in korea is only for a university. That' all ! I wonder that what kind of expression of sentence do I tell at last in essay... anyway... see you later~

Good Evening Ji Hoon!   Thank you for doing your homework. I commend you for that. There you go! Please, check the corrections I\'ve written here. Thanks. I\'ll call you on Wednesday.   T. Barbara^^,   Hello teacher~ >> Correct!Today is little bit cold, so I\'m wearing a thick coat. >> Today\'s weather is a little bit cold, so I\'m wearing a thick coat.Anyway, be careful not to catch a cold^^>> Correct!Today\'s homework is : What comes to mind when you hear the word \'adolescence\'?>> Correct!adolescence is very important to all, because we can make life-time friends. >> Adolescence is very important to all because we can make life-time friends.Until now, I usually meet my friends who was met at high school, and we used to talking about our story of high school.>> Until now, I usually meet my friends in high school and we used to talk about our high school life.They are so precious for me, and we are always assist each other, when anyone has a problem.>> They are so precious to me and we assist each other whenever someone has a problem.And in korea, we have to study hard for a entrance exam of university. >> In Korea, we have to study hard for an entrence exam in the a university.university is important to korean, so they are always study hard. >> Going to university is important to Koreans, so they always study hard. I\'m not agree this situation. >> I don\'t agree in this situation. but a number of people is study for university. >> There are a lot of people who study in a university. purpose of study in korea is only for a university.>> The purpose of studying hard in Korea is to enter in a university.That\' all !>>That\'s all!I wonder that what kind of expression of sentence do I tell at last in essay...>>I wonder that what kind of expression should I use in the last part of my essay... anyway... see you later~ >> Anyway... see you later~