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Hi wonderful monday~~!!! I was so tired last week. because i had too many business trips. This week also plan to have many business trips...OMG but I do my best to prepare the class and learn English. hihi today's homework when I study something. I think we need two things. First, Good teacher. It's not easy to learn that is not familiar with. so we need right instructions for keeping our time and efforts. second, motivation. If we meet good teacher but we do not have motivation, we can't make a result. It just waste the time. If we have clear purpose of study , we can achieve better result. and can study more happy. I'm very happy to study English. because i already have two things. great teacher and wonderful motivation

Hello Mr. [Name]!   This is another wonderful composition from you :) I hope you are referring to me kkkk I can tell that you are always motivated to learn. And when love what you are doing, it will definitely love you back. Again, thank you!   See you in class. ~Teacher Becca~ Here are some corrections: Hi wonderful monday~~!!!>> Hi! A wonderful Monday to you~I was so tired last week. >> correct :) >> OR: Last week, I was so tired. because i had too many business trips. >> Because I have been in too many business trips. This week also plan to have many business trips...OMG >> This week, I am also planning to have more business trips...OMG!but I do my best to prepare the class and learn English. hihi>> But I will do my best to prepare for the class and to learn English. hihitoday\'s homework >> correct :) >> OR: Homework for today:when I study something. >> When we study,  I think we need two things. >> correct :) >> OR: I think we need to consider two things. First, Good teacher. >> First, a good teacher. >> First is to have a good teacher. It\'s not easy to learn that is not familiar with. >> It is not easy to learn something that we are not familiar with. so we need right instructions for keeping our time and efforts.>> So we need to be given the right directions to utilize out time and effort wisely. second, motivation. >> Second is motivation. If we meet good teacher but we do not have motivation, we can\'t make a result. >> If we have a good teacher but don\'t have a motivation, we can\'t make a good result. It just waste the time. >> It\'s just a waste of time. If we have clear purpose of study , we can achieve better result. and can study more happy. >> If we have a clear purpose to study, we can achieve better results and be happier to study.I\'m very happy to study English. >> correct! >> OR: I am very happy in studying English. because i already have two things. >> Because I already have those two things:great teacher and wonderful motivation >> A great teacher and a wonderful motivation.