homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it's better to learn the teacher.
Because I can realize of listening the teacher's experience.
And I also get the answer for my question from teacher.
When I was studyng alone I can't progress the plan but if with a teacher I can progress the plan.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]!
Thank you for doing your homework :)
Thanks as well for showing your eagerness to learn.
I am more than happy to help you in your studies.
See you :)
~Teacher B~
Here are some corrections:
I think it\'s better to learn the teacher.
>> I think it\'s better to learn with a teacher.
>> I think it\'s better to learn from a teacher. Because I can realize of listening the teacher\'s experience.
>> Because I can learn more by listening to my teacher\'s experiences. And I also get the answer for my question from teacher.
>> And my teacher also helps me answer difficult questions. When I was studyng alone I can\'t progress the plan but if with a teacher I can progress the plan.
>> When I was studying alone, it felt like I am not having any progress at all. But when I began studying with a teacher, I know that I will improve further.
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