homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
A gracious Tuesday to you Tom!
Wow! What a composition! You did great again! High five for that!
I think Nobel Prize is really important for people.
We should be thankful to Nobel and the people who helped him.
I hope that you will receive a Nobel Prize someday.^^
Always believe in yourself! See you in class.
If you have any comments, questions, suggestions feel free to tell it in class. Take Care!
Teacher Nina
Nobel Prize is extremly great Prize.
>> Nobel Prize is an extremely great prize. ( Spelling check: extremely ^^ )
>> OR: Nobel Prize is an extremely great reward.
I want to recieve a Nobel Prize someday.
>> Correct! ( Spelling check: receive ^^ )
I respect people who recieve a Nobel Prize.
>> I respect those people who received a Nobel Prize. ( Spelling check: receive ^^ )
What do you think of Nobel Prize?
>> Correct!
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