Homework
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Great morning Ms. [Name]!
Happy Wednesday!
Times runs so fast!
Well, I am hoping and praying that you will really have a baby soon.
Having a baby in the family is a blessing and not a disturbance.
Maybe those couples who don\'t want to have a baby do not understand it.
Anyway, wish you luck on that.
See you later! ~_~
Always,
Kathrine ^^
List three things you need, even though they have come less popular and why?
At first, I need a baby who is healthy and lovely.
>> First, I need a baby who is healthy and lovely.
>> or: First, I need to have a healthy and lovely baby.
Some couples don\'t want to have one because they think baby will be disturb their life.
>> Some couples don\'t want to have one because they think baby will disturb their life.
However, I think the one is present and pleasure in family.
>> However, I think that having a baby is like a present and the baby will give pleasure to the family.
Second, I need a skill of work.
>> Second, I need to have a skill at work.
Maybe whoever seem to want this.
>> Maybe, may people seem to want to have this.
When I look around, I can see people who get a lot of talent.
>> When I am looking around, I can see many people who have a lot of talents.
I envy them.
>> correct!
Actually, I know \"Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.\"
>> Actually, I know that \"Success is 1% inspiration and 99% perspiration.\"
Third. I need a satisfaction.
>> Third, I need satisfaction.
When I was young, I think it is unneedless.
>> When I was young, I though it is unnecessary.
However, It is important because happiness is from satisfaction.
>> correct!
Sometime it is enough in my heart but sometime it is exhausted.
>> Sometimes, I feel in my heart that is enough but I still feel exhausted.
It is all not simple. Hahaha.
>> It is not at all simple. hahaha
Simply, I need a box of sweetpotato, cross-bag and hair pin. kkk
>> Simply, I need a box of sweetpotato, a cross-bag, and a hair pin. kkk
>> or: I simply need a box of sweetpotato, a cross-bag, and a hair pin. kkk
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