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Hi there again Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about our topic today.
Wow, what a nice description.
I didn\'t think that yellow is not clear.
All I thought that yellow is sunny and always happy.
Of course, life is not always perfect.
You undergo times which are clear or not.
But anyway, you have given me another interpretation about it so thanks for that.
See you tomorrow!
Enjoy your day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What color are you? Which color best represents you and why?
My students went to the English classroom so I am staying alone in the classroom.
>> correct!
I like this time.
>> correct!
Of course, I have to do a lot of work but I want to concentrate this homework, now. HaHaHa.
>> Of course, I have to do a lot of work but I want to concentrate on this homework now. Hahaha
My favorite color is light green and blue sky.
>> correct!
This is because it is resemble with nature.
>> This is because it resembles with the nature.
It\'s good for my sight and emotion.
>> correct!
If I express me to color, I\'d like to show yellow.
>> If a color could express myself, I\'d like to choose the yellow color.
It looks bright but it doesn\'t have calm.
>> It looks bright but it is not calm.
I think that my life is not clear.
>> correct!
I am considering my future and I can\'t arrage something.
>> correct! (spelling correction-arrange)
I am living happy everyday but not peaceful.
>> I am living happily everyday but nit peacefully.
Maybe this is because I am busy.
>> correct!
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