Homework.

2014-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Q : Is it important to try to understand people's motivations before judging their actions? A : It is a very interesting question for me. I think it is important to try to understand people's motivations before judging their actions. I have a few reasons for thinking this. First of all if we have motivations before judging their actions, we can do passionately. Not hand operated but activeness. furthemore People Having motivations, have obvious aim than annother. It is like catalyst in our body. those are the main reasons for my opinion.

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Hello, there! Nice to see your homework, [이름]! May you have a great day! Anyways, I have incorporated some expressions for to use someday^^ Q : Is it important to try to understand people\'s motivations before judging their actions?A : It is a very interesting question for me. >>CORRECT! >>A : It is a very fascinating question for me. I think it is important to try to understand people\'s motivations before judging their actions. >>CORRECT! >>I think it is necessary to try to understand people\'s motivations before judging their actions.I have a few reasons for thinking this. >>CORRECT! >>I have a few reasons to support this.First of all if we have motivations before judging their actions, we can do passionately. >>First of all, if we have motivations before judging their actions, we can do something passionately.Not hand operated but activeness. >>Not manually, but actively.furthemore People Having motivations, have obvious aim than annother. >>Furthermore, people who have motivations have more prevailing aims than people who don\'t.It is like catalyst in our body. >>It is a like catalyst in our body.those are the main reasons for my opinion. >>Those are the main reasons for my opinion.  

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