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2014-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Becca

학생이 쓴 원문

Hypermarkets sale setting fish, vegetables, spices packing food at all. We just buy and boil and eat. Very conveniented. So we need not to make difficulty spice and worry to delicious food.

강사 첨삭

Miss. [Name],   Thank you for doing your homework. I agree with your answer. I think that preparing food has become a lot easier these days. For people like me who doesn\'t know how to cook (and is trying very hard), Instant food is very convenient.   See you in class :)   ~Teacher B~   Here are some corrections:   Hypermarkets sale setting fish, vegetables, spices packing food at all. >> Hypermarkets are selling fish, vegetables, spices, and packed food nowadays. We just buy and boil and eat. >> All we need to do is to buy some, cook it, and it\'s ready to eat. Very conveniented. >> It is very convenient.So we need not to make difficulty spice and worry to delicious food. >> So we don\'t have to worry about which ingredient to use or worry about our cooking skills.

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