homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I like Belgium's chocolate.
Because it is deeo,soft and sweet.
Teacher Nina!
I'll have a English speaking contest.
So I'll make sentences,and you'll make correction.
So please don't give me a homework for about 7days.66
강사 첨삭
A great day to you Tom!
Wow! I love that chocolate!
Oh! I suddenly want to eat some chocolates today. Hihihihi!
Thank you for trusting me again.^^
I will be glad to help you with your speaking contest however, I still need to give you some homework but you don\'t have to do it .
You can send me other compositions that you like especially your English speech. ^^
I am excited to practice with you again. Go for the gold!
See you in class!!
Teacher Nina
I like Belgium\'s chocolate.
>> I like Belgian chocolate.Because it is deeo,soft and sweet.
>> Because it is soft and sweet. ( What do you mean with the word \"deeo\"? Can you please tell it in class? ^^)Teacher Nina!>> Correct!I\'ll have a English speaking contest.
>> I\'ll have an English speaking contest.
>> OR: I\'m going to join an English speaking contest. So I\'ll make sentences,and you\'ll make correction.
>> So, I\'ll make some sentences and you\'ll correct it.So please don\'t give me a homework for about 7days.66
>> Please don\'t give me homework for about seven days.
>> OR: Please don\'t give me homework for seven days.
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