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2014-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I like Belgium's chocolate. Because it is deeo,soft and sweet. Teacher Nina! I'll have a English speaking contest. So I'll make sentences,and you'll make correction. So please don't give me a homework for about 7days.66

강사 첨삭

A great day to you Tom! Wow! I love that chocolate! Oh! I suddenly want to eat some chocolates today. Hihihihi! Thank you for trusting me again.^^ I will be glad to help you with your speaking contest however, I still need to give you some homework but you don\'t have to do it . You can send me other compositions that you like especially your English speech. ^^ I am excited to practice with you again. Go for the gold! See you in class!! Teacher Nina   I like Belgium\'s chocolate. >> I like Belgian chocolate.Because it is deeo,soft and sweet. >> Because it is soft and sweet. ( What do you mean with the word \"deeo\"? Can you please tell it in class? ^^)Teacher Nina!>> Correct!I\'ll have a English speaking contest. >> I\'ll have an English speaking contest. >> OR: I\'m going to join an English speaking contest. So I\'ll make sentences,and you\'ll make correction. >> So, I\'ll make some sentences and you\'ll correct it.So please don\'t give me a homework for about 7days.66 >> Please don\'t give me homework for about seven days. >> OR: Please don\'t give me homework for seven days.

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