homework
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강사 첨삭
Great morning Mr. [이름]!
How are you feeling today?
I guess that you re still sleeping at this time. kkk
Anyway, I\'m shocked that you like dark colors.
But of course, it\'s good to know that those colors does not represent your personality.
In my own opinion and for a short period that we have talked, your personality is not dark or gloomy.
You are a lively person, I guess.
So please try to wear bright colors too.
Wearing black or gray will make you older. I swear. kkk \",)
See you later Mr. [이름]!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Composition: What color are you? Which color best represents you and why?
I like black or brown.
>> correct!
I tend to prefer dark color to bright color.
>> I tend to prefer dark color than bright color.
So the color of my car is black, my clothes almost are black or gray.
>> So the color of my car is black, and my clothes are almost black or gray.
But Don\'t worry~ My personality isn\'t gloomy and dark.
>> But don\'t worry since my personality is not gloomy and dark.
I think that I like these colors because they aren\'t easily dirty.
>> I think that I like these colors because they aren\'t get easily dirty.
Thanks for reading.
>> correct!
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