Homework^^
학생이 쓴 원문
HI, Kristel^^ Before I write the composition, there are very trivial questions I want to ask. In yesterday's feedback, you polished my English this way.
5. I have to get out my house at 9am.
>> I have to get out of our house at 9am.
6. You have take subway with many people.
>> You have to take the subway with my people.
I guess in number 5, 'our' may be changed to 'my' and in 6, 'my' may be changed to 'many, right?
And the reason why it is necessary to be polite first before asking a request is because looking polite may make possibility of getting what I want higher.
But like we talked this morning, Korean students are required to be polite too much in front of teachers especially professors. In fact, on last Tuesday, I saw a professor who talked less respectfully to her student even they met first time.
It didn't seem good to me. And I think the reason why students are even more polite to their professors is to get better grades. It's sad because I'm also one of them. Good night!!
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!!
It\'s very honest of you to say that! :) I always love how keen you are in all details of our lessons
I appreciate it so much! ;)
I already answered your questions in the class so I hope everything\'s clear already..kkkk
Have a nice day and see you~~
T.Kristel-
HI, Kristel^^ Before I write the composition, there are very trivial questions I want to ask.
>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
In yesterday\'s feedback, you polished my English this way.
>> CORRECT!!5. I have to get out my house at 9am.>> I have to get out of our house at 9am.6. You have take subway with many people.>> You have to take the subway with my people.I guess in number 5, \'our\' may be changed to \'my\' and in 6, \'my\' may be changed to \'many, right?
>> CORRECT!!And the reason why it is necessary to be polite first before asking a request is because looking polite may make possibility of getting what I want higher.
>> And the reason why it is necessary to be polite first before asking a request is because appearing polite may increase the possibility of getting what I want.But like we talked this morning, Korean students are required to be polite too much in front of teachers especially professors.
>> But like what we\'ve talked about this morning, Korean students are required to be too polite in front of teachers especially professors.
In fact, on last Tuesday, I saw a professor who talked less respectfully to her student even they met first time.
>> In fact, last Tuesday, I saw a professor who talked rudely to her student even though they just met for the first time.It didn\'t seem good to me. And I think the reason why students are even more polite to their professors is to get better grades.
>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
It\'s sad because I\'m also one of them. Good night!!
>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
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