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2014-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Finally. I was crying in front of my husband. I said to him that it's difficult to control my mind thesedays and I can't understand my situation. Although, he would be embarrassed about that but he cheer me up. I could be happy again. Plus, Your comment makes me happy, too. Thank you:) passed away, do without, look forward to, called off, made up, carried away, break out, run out, put up with, keep up 1. Don't smoke in the forest. Fires break out easily at this time of the year. 2. I called off seeing my friends again. 3. I'm afraid; we have run out of apple juice. Will an orange juice do? 4. Your website has helped me a lot to keep up the good work. 5. A friend of mine has looking forward to her wedding. 6. His mother can't put up with his terrible behavior anymore. 7. As an excuse for being late, she made up a whole story.

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Good evening Ms. [Name]!
How are you feeling now?
Why did you cry?
Did something happen or just because of mixed emotions nowadays.
I hope that you are feeling much better after crying.
And it\'s good to know that your husband understands your situation.
Have a good night sleep tonight and I hope that tomorrow you will feel much better.
See you then.
Take care and good night!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

Finally. I was crying in front of my husband.
>> Finally, I was crying in front of my husband.
I said to him that it\'s difficult to control my mind these days and I can\'t understand my situation.

>> correct!
>> or: I told him that it\'s difficult for me to control my mind these days and I couldn\'t understand my situation.
Although, he would be embarrassed about that but he cheer me up.

>> Although he was embarrassed about it, he still cheered me up.
I could be happy again.

>> correct!
>> or: I was happy again.
Plus, Your comment makes me happy, too. Thank you:)

>> correct!
passed away, do without, look forward to, called off, made up, carried away, break out, run out, put up with, keep up

1. Don\'t smoke in the forest. Fires break out easily at this time of the year.

>> correct!
2. I called off seeing my friends again.

>> look forward to
3. I\'m afraid; we have run out of apple juice. Will an orange juice do?

>> correct!
4. Your website has helped me a lot to keep up the good work.

>> correct!
5. A friend of mine has looking forward to her wedding.

>> called off
6. His mother can\'t put up with his terrible behavior anymore.

>> correct!
7. As an excuse for being late, she made up a whole story.

>> correct!

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