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Part1."My lovely pets" I have lovely brothers. Although, they are not brothers to mom give birth. But I love them very much.They are my salt water fish. I always wanted to breed a salt water fish! When my mother and father allowed to breed the salt water fish,in the 3th grade winter vacation, I was so happy. However, the imformations from books and newspapers didn't help me to breed and administration. _to be continue tomorrow..._ My dream home is big and comfortable. I want to live in a big house near the ocean. There will be a backyard,pool and the other belonging. What is your dream home? Tell me in our class.^^

Hello Tom! Wow! Thank you for sending this in.^^ You are so sweet! Your salt water fishes are blessed to have you. I know that you really love them. Oh! I will be glad to tell you about my dream house. Can\'t wait to talk to you. See you!Teacher Nina   Part1.\"My lovely pets\" >> Correct >> OR: Part 1: My Lovely Pets ( Check: proper spacing. ^^)I have lovely brothers. Although, they are not brothers to mom give birth. But I love them very much. >> Did you mean: I have lovely brothers. Even if they are not my real siblings whom my mom gave birth to, I love them very much. >> OR: I have lovely brothers and I love them very much even if they are not my biological siblings. They are my salt water fish. >> They are my salt water fishes. I always wanted to breed a salt water fish! >> Correct When my mother and father allowed to breed the salt water fish,in the 3th grade winter vacation, I was so happy. >> My mother and father allowed me to breed salt water fishes when I was in third grade. It was during my winter vacation and I was so happy, >> OR: My parents allowed me to breed salt water fishes when I was in third grade, during my winter vacation. I was so happy. However, the imformations from books and newspapers didn\'t help me to breed and administration. >> Did you mean: However, the information from books and newspapers didn\'t help me to know how to breed and administer food to them. >> OR: However, the information from books and newspapers didn\'t help me in terms of raising and taking good care of them. _to be continue tomorrow..._>> To be continued tomorrow. My dream home is big and comfortable. >> My dream home is big and comfortable for me to stay. >> OR: My dream house is big and comfortable for me to stay. I want to live in a big house near the ocean. >> CorrectThere will be a backyard,pool and the other belonging. >> There will be a backyard, pool and other belongings. >> OR: There will be a backyard, pool and other things that I can use. What is your dream home? >> Correct >> OR: What is your dream house? Tell me in our class.^^ >> Correct