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2014-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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I think there are many different reasons why a lot of Koreans are trying to learn different languages. Actually I didn't know many Koreans have tendency to learn more foreign languages. But there must be their own reasons to learn other languages for example for their business or self-improvement and on. Being able to speak other languages like native speakers is the most rewarding thing to me. So I keep studying English and Japanese and Chinese. I want myself to be multilingual but I don't like studying that much. What a paradox. kkk However I sometimes imagine myself in the future being multilingual. And being capable of speaking different languages can give you many chances to get along with different people and you can express your opinion or thoughts more directly and clearer. Also, the fact that it is a capability you can use in your lifetime can be one of attracting reasons why we learn foreign languages. Bye!! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!! Thank you very much for sending me this! I am so glad that you know your goals in learning the language. Keep them up and see you on Monday~~ T.Kristel- I think there are many different reasons why a lot of Koreans are trying to learn different languages. >> CORRECT!! Actually I didn\'t know many Koreans have tendency to learn more foreign languages. >> Actually I didn\'t know that many Koreans have the tendency to learn more foreign languages. But there must be their own reasons to learn other languages for example for their business or self-improvement and on. >> But they must have their own reasons in learning other languages like for example, it\'s for their businesses, self-improvement and so on.Being able to speak other languages like native speakers is the most rewarding thing to me. So I keep studying English and Japanese and Chinese. >> CORRECT!!  So I keep studying English, Japanese and Chinese.I want myself to be multilingual but I don\'t like studying that much. >>  CORRECT!!  What a paradox. kkk >> CORRECT!!  (Ironic, isn\'t it? kkk )However I sometimes imagine myself in the future being multilingual. >> CORRECT!!  And being capable of speaking different languages can give you many chances to get along with different people and you can express your opinion or thoughts more directly and clearer. >> And being able to speak different languages can give you many chances to get along with different people and you can express your opinions or thoughts more directly and clearly.Also, the fact that it is a capability you can use in your lifetime can be one of attracting reasons why we learn foreign languages. >> CORRECT!!  Bye!! ^^ >> CORRECT!! 

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