Homework
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It was snow in the morning but it's sunny now. Although it's cold, the sky is blue. I expect warm weekend. I will do last homework in this week.
If you could cook a special dish (any kind) for someone, what would it be and why?
I want to make a special food for my husband. I make rice and just heat some soup every morning. The soup was made by my mother. Thanks to my mother, I had a easy time during a week. On the other hand, I'm sorry to my husband. Actually, we both have a job and busy so we devide family affairs. Cooking is my work so if I have a enough time, I'd like to make a special food for him. He likes Gimchi stwe that is not difficult. It just need tuna and tubu. It's a dairy food in my house. Plus, he likes to order a fry chicken. It need only money. Hahaha. I don't like to use artificial flavors so some time my husband was not sastisfied my cook. If he want to eat special food, he tell me 'let's go your mother's house. Finally. is not my cook special?kkk
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!
Great evening to you!
Well, you are still lucky that your mother is there to made some soup for you.
You should have inherited her talent in cooking. kkkk
As they saying my country, every women should know how to cook so if they will get married, it would not be a problem between their husband.
But of course, you can learnhow to cook anyway.
it\'s not yet late. hahaha.
Anyway, hope you will enjoy your weekend!
Take care too!
See you next week!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
It was snow in the morning but it\'s sunny now.
>> It was snowing in the morning but it\'s sunny now.
Although it\'s cold, the sky is blue.
>> correct!
I expect warm weekend.
>> I\'m expecting that it would be warm this weekend.
>> or: I expect that it would be warm this weekend.
I will do last homework in this week.
>> I will do thelast homework this week.
If you could cook a special dish (any kind) for someone, what would it be and why?
I want to make a special food for my husband.
>> correct!
I make rice and just heat some soup every morning.
>> I a making a rice and heat some soup every morning.
The soup was made by my mother.
>> correct!
Thanks to my mother, I had a easy time during a week.
>> Thanks to my mother, I am having an easy time during the weekend.
On the other hand, I\'m sorry to my husband.
>> correct!
Actually, we both have a job and busy so we devide family affairs.
>> Actually, we both have a job and we are both busy so we divide the house chores.
Cooking is my work so if I have a enough time, I\'d like to make a special food for him.
>> Cooking is my work so if I have enough time, I\'d like to make a special food for him.
He likes Gimchi stwe that is not difficult.
>> correct! (spelling correction-stew)
It just need tuna and tubu.
>> correct!
It\'s a dairy food in my house.
>> correct!
Plus, he likes to order a fry chicken.
>> Plus, he likes to order fried chicken.
It need only money. Hahaha.
>> It just needs money. Hahaha.
I don\'t like to use artificial flavors so some time my husband was not sastisfied my cook.
>> I don\'t like to use artificial flavors so sometimes my husband is not satisfied with the dish that I cooked.
If he want to eat special food, he tell me \'let\'s go your mother\'s house.
>> If he wants to eat a special food, he always says, \"Let\'s go to your mother\'s house.\"
Finally. is not my cook special?kkk
>> Finally, the way I cook is not special. kkk
Great evening to you!
Well, you are still lucky that your mother is there to made some soup for you.
You should have inherited her talent in cooking. kkkk
As they saying my country, every women should know how to cook so if they will get married, it would not be a problem between their husband.
But of course, you can learnhow to cook anyway.
it\'s not yet late. hahaha.
Anyway, hope you will enjoy your weekend!
Take care too!
See you next week!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
It was snow in the morning but it\'s sunny now.
>> It was snowing in the morning but it\'s sunny now.
Although it\'s cold, the sky is blue.
>> correct!
I expect warm weekend.
>> I\'m expecting that it would be warm this weekend.
>> or: I expect that it would be warm this weekend.
I will do last homework in this week.
>> I will do thelast homework this week.
If you could cook a special dish (any kind) for someone, what would it be and why?
I want to make a special food for my husband.
>> correct!
I make rice and just heat some soup every morning.
>> I a making a rice and heat some soup every morning.
The soup was made by my mother.
>> correct!
Thanks to my mother, I had a easy time during a week.
>> Thanks to my mother, I am having an easy time during the weekend.
On the other hand, I\'m sorry to my husband.
>> correct!
Actually, we both have a job and busy so we devide family affairs.
>> Actually, we both have a job and we are both busy so we divide the house chores.
Cooking is my work so if I have a enough time, I\'d like to make a special food for him.
>> Cooking is my work so if I have enough time, I\'d like to make a special food for him.
He likes Gimchi stwe that is not difficult.
>> correct! (spelling correction-stew)
It just need tuna and tubu.
>> correct!
It\'s a dairy food in my house.
>> correct!
Plus, he likes to order a fry chicken.
>> Plus, he likes to order fried chicken.
It need only money. Hahaha.
>> It just needs money. Hahaha.
I don\'t like to use artificial flavors so some time my husband was not sastisfied my cook.
>> I don\'t like to use artificial flavors so sometimes my husband is not satisfied with the dish that I cooked.
If he want to eat special food, he tell me \'let\'s go your mother\'s house.
>> If he wants to eat a special food, he always says, \"Let\'s go to your mother\'s house.\"
Finally. is not my cook special?kkk
>> Finally, the way I cook is not special. kkk
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