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Wow! I was surprised at the subject you gave me because we've always dealt with positive subjects.
I think I'm someone who doesn't get furious much.
However I become sulky quite often.
Maybe because I become sulky too often which makes me express my emotion promptly, there are fewer events that makes me furious.
But of course there are things that makes me furious.
If someone treat me rudely and that happens several times, I become furious.
Then I usually wash my hands of the person.
And the second thing that makes me furious is the situation concerned with my grades.
When I was freshman, I got C+ in a Chinese class. And I visited the professor because I studied really hard.
Then he said I wasn't good at writing. But I thought my writing was as good as other's so I kept asking him to give me better grades. But he kept saying same thing. And in the end, he said "Why are you obsessed with grades? You're just a freshman." Then I realized he would never listen to meItmakesmeangryevennow
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Thank you very much for narrating such story here in your homework!
Anyway, kindly let me know tomorrow what you meant with one of your sentences here!
That is for me to edit it properly according to how you would really want it to be expressed. :)
Thank you so much and I\'d appreciate it!
I\'m looking forward to hearing from you again, [이름]~~
T.Kristel-
Wow! I was surprised at the subject you gave me because we\'ve always dealt with positive subjects.
>> CORRECT!!I think I\'m someone who doesn\'t get furious much.
>> CORRECT!!However I become sulky quite often.
>> CORRECT!!Maybe because I become sulky too often which makes me express my emotion promptly, there are fewer events that makes me furious.
>> CORRECT!!But of course there are things that makes me furious.
>> But of course there are still rare things that make me furious.If someone treat me rudely and that happens several times, I become furious.
>> If someone treats me rudely and it happens several times, I become furious.Then I usually wash my hands of the person.
>> (Please explain this part to me tomorrow. I couldn\'t edit this part because I don\'t exactly understand what you mean with it.)And the second thing that makes me furious is the situation concerned with my grades.
>> CORRECT!!When I was freshman, I got C+ in a Chinese class. And I visited the professor because I studied really hard.
>> When I was a freshman, I got C+ in a Chinese class so I consulted the professor because I studied really hard.Then he said I wasn\'t good at writing. But I thought my writing was as good as other\'s so I kept asking him to give me better grades.
>> CORRECT!! But I thought my writing was as good as the other\'s so I kept asking him to give me better grades.
But he kept saying same thing. And in the end, he said \"Why are you obsessed with grades? You\'re just a freshman.
>> But he kept saying the same thing too. In the endm he said, \"Why are you so obsessed with your grades? CORRECT!!\"
\" Then I realized he would never listen to meItmakesmeangryevennow
>> When I realized that he would never listen to me, it made me angry even until now.
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