homework
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Great Monday morning Mr. [이름]!
Did you have a good night sleep?
I hope so.
Anyway, thanks for sending your composition.
It\'s good to know that you know how to cook.
That\'s a good point on your part. kkk
Because many people who are living alone can\'t or are lazy to cook.
But good for you. You will not starve. haha
Well, see you later!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Composition: If you could cook a special dish (any kinds) for someone, what would it be and why?
I have lived alone for one year.
>> correct!
>> or: I am living alone for a year already.
So I can cook very well.
>> correct!
If I cooked a dish for someone, I would make a pig-bulgogi.
>> If I will cook a dish for someone, I will make a pig-bulgogi.
I sometime dish a bulgogi when I want to drink or be hungry.
>> I am sometimes cooking a bulgogi when I want to drink or when I am hungry.
I am confident.
>> correct!
Thank for reading.
>> Thanks for reading!
>> or: Thank you for reading!
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