homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I want a reliable friend.
Because who is reliable a friend who is always by my side
when sad or happy, or even hard.
강사 첨삭
Miss. [Name],
Thanks for this one^^
I agree that a friend should be reliable.
A friend should be somebody whom you can trust as well.
See you in class!
~Teacher B~
Here are some corrections:
I want a reliable friend.
>> correct :)
>> I want a friend who is reliable.Because who is reliable a friend who is always by my side
>> Because a reliable friend will always be by my side.
>> Because a reiable friend will stay by my side. when sad or happy, or even hard.
>> Whenever I am sad or happy, and even through the hard times.
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