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2014-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Becca

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I want a reliable friend. Because who is reliable a friend who is always by my side when sad or happy, or even hard.

강사 첨삭

Miss. [Name],   Thanks for this one^^ I agree that a friend should be reliable. A friend should be somebody whom you can trust as well. See you in class! ~Teacher B~ Here are some corrections:   I want a reliable friend. >> correct :) >> I want a friend who is reliable.Because who is reliable a friend who is always by my side >> Because a reliable friend will always be by my side. >> Because a reiable friend will stay by my side. when sad or happy, or even hard. >> Whenever I am sad or happy, and even through the hard times.

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