Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Great afternoon Ms. [Name]!
How are you doing?
Well, I know this song.
It is familiar to me. I can also sing it for you if you want. kkkk
You know what, when I was young, my father would always play old English song or English medley songs every morning.
That is our alarm clock when we were young. So me and my sisters would wake up listening to those songs.
And when we are in the car, he would also play songs like that;.
Maybe that is the reason why I like listening to old songs especially when I like to calm my mind and I just want to read.
It is good to know that you have a good memory in this song.
Anyway, thanks for today and hope you will have a good time at work.
See you and take care!
Always.
Kathrine ^^
Does certain music bring memories to your mind? If so, which ones and why?
Do you know this song, \'The end of the world\'.
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>> or: Do you know the song \"The end of the world?\"
This is old pop that I have a good memory.
>> This is an old song which I have a good memory.
When I was middle school student, I learn English for the first time.
>> When I was a middle school student, I learned English for the first time.
At that time, my English teacher teached this song.
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I think song is good method to learn something and to memory.
>> I think this song is a good method to learn and memorize something.
I can\'t forget it.
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The rhythm and melody was good.
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She said this song has love story that someone lost lover and then he made this song.
>> She said that this song has a love story and that someone lost his lover so he made this song.
I will show some of the lyrics.
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\'Why does the sun go on shining?
Why does the sea rush to shore?
Don\'t they know it\'s the end of the world.
Cause you don\'t love me anymore?\'
If you don\'t know this song, I can sing for you next morning. kkk.
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It is my first English song.
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When I hear this song in the radio by some chance, I feel so great.
>> When I hear this song in the radio by chance, I feel so great.
This is because it would be my memorial song.
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