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Parts2.I just imagine a fishes and corals with boast a graceful and beautiful color figure swim not experience their life.
My fish tank is a special tank that don't have to change water.
It is comfortable because it don't have to change water.
But it is the same to clean the sea grass and some depurate,measurement a temperature and mesurement a salinty with common fish tank._to be continue_
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Good day to you Tom!
Happy Monday! BELATED HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
You celebrated your birthday yesterday!!!
I wish you all the best in life. I hope that you will be able to reach your dreams!
You did a pretty nice job with your speech. However, I need to discuss the sentences with you in class.
Can\'t wait to talk to you. See you!Teacher Nina
Parts2.
>> Part 2
I just imagine a fishes and corals with boast a graceful and beautiful color figure swim not experience their life.
>> Did you mean: I just imagine the fishes and corals with boast that swim gracefully with beautiful colors that they haven\'t experience in their life.
>> OR: I just imagine the fishes and corals with boast that gracefully swim with beautiful colors that they haven\'t experience in their life.
My fish tank is a special tank that don\'t have to change water.
>> My fish tank is special because I don\'t have to change the water.It is comfortable because it don\'t have to change water.
>> It is comfortable for me because I don\'t have to change it by myself.
>> Better: It is convenient for me because I don\'t have to do it by myself.But it is the same to clean the sea grass and some depurate,measurement a temperature and mesurement a salinty with common fish tank.
>> Did you mean: But when it comes to cleaning the sea grass and some depurates, measuring the temperature and salinity a common fish tank has, I have to do it by myself.
>> OR: When it comes to cleaning the sea grass and some depurates, measuring the temperature and salinity, I have to do it by my self like in a common fish tank.
_to be continue_
>> Correct!
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