homework
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Hi there Mr. [이름]!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about the topic in our homework.
I guess, I don\'t like heavy metal music because it\'s too noisy.
Anyway, thanks for today and see you tomorrow!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Composition: Does certain music bring memories to your mind? If so, which ones and why?
When I was middl or high school students, I liked to listen to heavy metal music.
>> When I was a middle school or high school student, I like to heavy metal music.
Among several singers, I liked METALICA and I have been a fan since that.
>> Among several singers, I like METALICA and I have been their fan ever since.
These days when I sometimes listen to METALICA\'s best music, I bring my student memories to my mind.
>> These days when I sometimes listen to METALICA\'s best music, it brings back my memories as a student.
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