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2014-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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You're right. The more I practice, the more I can do well. <Homework> I have read a book "I don't believe the strategy on the desk". This book is about Erwin Rommel and influenced my values. My values was always to be slow. But through this book, I realized that sometimes I need to rush. Because there aren't always the time for preparing.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Practice makes perfect as they say. I know that with constant practice you can be successful. I can see your potentials in speaking the language well, so just don\'t lose hope.

Keep on going!!!

T. Jeny

 

You\'re right.

>>correct
The more I practice, the more I can do well.

>>correct

OR>>The more I practice, the more I can perform well.
<Homework>
I have read a book \"I don\'t believe the strategy on the desk\".

>>I read a book, \"I don\'t believe the strategy on the desk\".
This book is about Erwin Rommel and influenced my values.

>>This book is about Erwin Rommel and it influenced my values.
My values was always to be slow.

>>correct
But through this book, I realized that sometimes I need to rush.

>>correct
Because there aren\'t always the time for preparing.

>>Because we don\'t always have enough time to prepare.

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