Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Practice makes perfect as they say. I know that with constant practice you can be successful. I can see your potentials in speaking the language well, so just don\'t lose hope.
Keep on going!!!
T. Jeny
You\'re right.
>>correct
The more I practice, the more I can do well.
>>correct
OR>>The more I practice, the more I can perform well.
<Homework>
I have read a book \"I don\'t believe the strategy on the desk\".
>>I read a book, \"I don\'t believe the strategy on the desk\".
This book is about Erwin Rommel and influenced my values.
>>This book is about Erwin Rommel and it influenced my values.
My values was always to be slow.
>>correct
But through this book, I realized that sometimes I need to rush.
>>correct
Because there aren\'t always the time for preparing.
>>Because we don\'t always have enough time to prepare.
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